Nicole Hawkins Poet Quintain (English)

A New Day

Our lost love's ghost still lingers
As I try to start anew
I ask an anonymous God with templed fingers
for strength to get me through
I know what I must do


By: Nicole Hawkins
written for "God, Ghost, and Love"

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2011 at 5:01 AM Congratulations Nicole on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol

John Freeman April 16, 2011 at 5:44 PM Great to see you at the top once more Nicole. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored third place. Agape, Moses

Dr Hitendra Mehta April 16, 2011 at 3:44 AM Many congrats Nicole for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta

Gautami Phookan April 16, 2011 at 3:39 AM Super Congrats Nicole on your 3rd place win.Good introspection here..Love, Gautami

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2011 at 6:01 PM I love how this one makes me wonder at the end what you must do. VEry well written quintain. Congratulations, Nicole.

Elaine George April 15, 2011 at 5:58 PM Very deep and profound, dear Nicole. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 15, 2011 at 4:07 PM Congrats Nicole on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest with this super entry luv.. enjoy your top spot and happy weekend too..

Sara Kendrick April 15, 2011 at 3:26 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta April 15, 2011 at 8:29 AM Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, Nicole

Dr.Ram Mehta April 7, 2011 at 12:25 PM Thanks for the entry, Nicole

Roxanna Johnson April 7, 2011 at 9:32 AM (: very nice

Nick Bagnall April 7, 2011 at 4:37 AM Nice poem, change the form to Quintain I think you missed :)

Carolyn Devonshire April 6, 2011 at 9:20 PM Awesome, Nicole. You took the theme and made it your own. Excellent Quintain for Dr. Ram's contest. Surely a winner! Best wishes, Carolyn

Brian Kilpatrick April 6, 2011 at 9:04 PM Nicely done Nicole, good luck. Brian