A New Day

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Storm passed, Sky clears, Clouds saunter, Rainbow nears. Valley yawns, Rivers run, Birds wake up the daisy sun.

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Date: 11/5/2023 5:08:00 PM

Love this! Simple, sweet, magical

Raven Howell
Date: 11/6/2023 9:25:00 AM

Thank you so much, Trudy!

Date: 11/5/2023 5:07:00 PM

Love this. Simple, sweet, magical.

Date: 5/16/2023 10:06:00 AM

Gorgeous poem!

Raven Howell
Date: 5/16/2023 1:11:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paige!

Date: 10/4/2022 7:16:00 AM

So cute! The "daisy sun" is fabulous :) Linda

Raven Howell
Date: 5/16/2023 1:13:00 PM

Linda, thanks for your support!

Date: 8/1/2022 5:02:00 PM

Ahh!! I enjoyed the flow of this one. Such beautiful lines to go with the photo. Sara

Raven Howell
Date: 8/2/2022 4:48:00 AM

Hi Sara! Thanks for your kind comment!