A New Day

I hear the music play as I begin to dance in a wonderful trance. It's a new day! As the haunting notes of a silver flute float across the cool morning air, I feel the breeze in my hair. I feel the beat of a drum drumming, drumming making me groove and move my feet, I feel like I could fly when harp strings take wings into a clear blue sky. Suddenly golden trumpets join the fray heralding a beautiful new day And his guitar begins to play. By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: 3/2/2019 “All Rights Reserved”
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Date: 3/26/2019 3:51:00 PM
Really great poem
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/27/2019 3:16:00 AM
Thanks, Allen. I'm so pleased you like it. Carole :D
Date: 3/7/2019 7:59:00 AM
Wonderful use of words. A outstanding poem.
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/7/2019 5:12:00 PM
Thank you, John, and thank you for reading my poem. Carole Duet :D
Date: 3/2/2019 7:37:00 PM
Love this style you wrote in. This is very nice.
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/7/2019 5:13:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. It's a "new" style. What should I call it? Carole :D
Date: 3/2/2019 2:08:00 PM
Now that's the way to start a day, well done Carole...
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/2/2019 2:56:00 PM
Yes it is, Charlie. I always start my day with music. Thanks so much. Carole :D
Date: 3/2/2019 11:53:00 AM
Where would be without music, inspires us to do so much.. Lovely poem Carole..
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/2/2019 2:59:00 PM
For sure, Z. I have been waiting for an inspiration and it was there all along: Music, my muse. Thank you for reading and commenting, dear friend. Carole :D
Date: 3/2/2019 10:46:00 AM
Lovely, Carole. Love it.
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/2/2019 3:02:00 PM
Thank you, Line. So glad you "love it". Carole :D
Date: 3/2/2019 7:07:00 AM
It's a beautiful new day, indeed..notes of a flute, beat of a drum...a guitar begins to play..a lovely write Carole..I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/2/2019 3:04:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. So glad you "enjoyed" this one. Carole :D
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