Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Haibun

A New Day

A NEW DAY

after a long walk on the road i paved for myself i stand awhile to look ahead, see the dusk silently descend with the twilight gleam on the horizon, look back through the spreading haze of oblivion, see the fading faces recede behind the veil of silver dust i raised on my way in happy journey to where i am now at the near end of the road on the fringe of nowhere where the sapphire night is falling like the mist of dreams with the hue of the stardust marking for me a mystique  road shining with patina of joy i shall follow, go beyond the unseen horizon to meet the new sun rising with the tapestry of colors in my sky unfurling a new day for me i will traverse until the golden sun sets to rise again

on flushing meadow

pearls of morning dew sparkle

faces rise from dust

June 7, 2018

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Susan Ashley August 2, 2019 at 8:21 PM A haibun of exquisite beauty, Subimal. Your artistry shines. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Charles Messina August 2, 2019 at 6:32 AM Excellent Subimal. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Blessings.. Charlie

Sara Kendrick July 7, 2018 at 5:29 PM Congrats on your winning work. Very expressive and descriptive. Sara Subimal Sinha-Roy July 8, 2018 at 12:43 AM Thank you, Sara for your visit.

Anisha Dutta July 6, 2018 at 10:13 PM That's the poetic touch, you own. Congrats. Subimal Sinha-Roy July 8, 2018 at 12:43 AM Thank you.

Eve Roper July 6, 2018 at 9:38 PM Beautiful poem, Subimal...Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve Subimal Sinha-Roy July 8, 2018 at 12:40 AM Thank you, Eve.

Susan Gentry July 6, 2018 at 3:07 PM Congratulations on your win.So much in this I like. "...road I paved for myself...", "...at the end of the road on the fringe of nowhere...", and a few more. Profound. Well done! A fave. Subimal Sinha-Roy July 8, 2018 at 12:40 AM Thank you so much, Susan for your visit and for your nice comments.

Mick Talbot July 6, 2018 at 5:44 AM A haibun that should be recorded for prosperity, will faces' rise from the dust, a profound question a profound haibun, a winner, congratulations Subimal, and thank you for the pleasure of your participation, Mick Mick Talbot July 8, 2018 at 5:12 AM Quote Subimal Sinha-Roy “Thank you so much, Mick, for the placement and for your nice words of appreciation that motivate me immensely. In place of "prosperity," you perhaps meant "posterity". Thank you.”, unquote. My pleasure Subimal, & thank u 4 the heads up on my childish error, 4 indeed I meant 'posterity', however, I do hope & wish it brings u future prosperity if it hasn't already done so, thanks again, Mick Subimal Sinha-Roy July 6, 2018 at 6:26 AM Thank you so much, Mick for the placement and for your nice words of appreciation that motivate me immensely. In place of "prosperity" you perhaps meant "posterity". Thank you.

Kim Rodrigues June 7, 2018 at 1:01 PM Pearls of morning dew...beautiful! Kim Rodrigues July 5, 2018 at 4:16 PM Congrats on first place! Subimal Sinha-Roy June 8, 2018 at 3:16 AM Thank you, Kim for visiting and nice comment. Subimal Sinha-Roy June 8, 2018 at 3:16 AM Thank you, Kim for visiting and nice comment.