A New Beginning

Rain's drizzling from forest canopies,
Evening sun peeking through leaves,
Flowers rising from decaying hues
Amid the woods tangled and untidy.

Shadows are dancing unknowingly 
Whispering evening wind songs,
To the music of a distant waterfall.

They witnessed my arrival 
With a cautious screech and roar,
A suspecting growl, and buzz.
It was the elephants' trumpeting
That made chimpanzees scream.

In the wilderness of dissonance 
I'm seeking peace and harmony.
Moon is emerging from darkened hues,
A shiny star is peering through.

A starry night guides my path,
Silently contemplating, traversing 
The mountains of nothingness;
Meditating to exit solitude,
Looking for the glorious morning sun.

Magical palace where you dream
The arrival of a new world
Worshipping serendipity,
Drowned in agony, swallowing reality.

The fog of misery has vanished 
Disappearing like the morning mist.
Birds are singing morning songs,
Rising horizon signals a new beginning.

July 31, 2017
Placed 1st: Brian's Choice 4 Contest by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Way to go. Very expressive and descriptive lines penned. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara K
Chuuk Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 8:33 PM
My envision of this, is, you were in the jungle/forest in Thailand. It sure does sound like an epic adventure. Awesomeness :)
Horsman Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 9:02 PM
Looking back on your oldies, Vijay. Another gem. Love this poem.
Roper Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 3:25 PM
Vijay, congratulations on your 1st place win with this beautiful verse. Again, you make me feel like I am right there in the middle of all that imagery. Hugs Eve
Idudje Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 2:55 PM
Congratulation On your Big Win Articulate Flows Bravo
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May 6, 2020 at 3:08 PM
Goldsmith Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 12:14 PM
Congratulations on your win. There are always new beginnings. Guess that is what life is all about. Enjoy your day and win........
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 3:23 PM
Utterly gorgous , my friend
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 3:20 PM
aha, finally I found a poem I have not seen, way back here!! Let me read it now.
Tripp Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 8:22 AM
Very lovely write, Vijay. Beautiful.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 4:58 PM
A rainforest epiphany is a righteous awakening ... very spiritual poem, Vijay. The imagery is spectacular, and the prose is oh so elegant. You are a very talented poet. Outstanding poem, a fave for sure. Love and much respect.
Pandit Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 5:21 PM
Thank you Freddie for your lovely comments.. appreciate you reading through this long poem.
Vyas Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 1:27 AM
Like this ,really beautiful lines
Pandit Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 6:10 AM
Thank you so much for your visit--love your comment.
Pandit Avatar
August 15, 2017 at 5:16 PM
Thank you Anita. Delighted by your visit.
Harris Avatar
August 15, 2017 at 5:05 PM
Full of sounds! Reading this was a nice experience.
Sands Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 6:03 PM
Excellent Vijay! Keep up the beautiful writing. It is very enjoyable to read. :)
Pandit Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 7:33 PM
Thank you for reading through this rather long poem. So happy to get your comments.
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