A New and Old Sway

Once a man told me of this saying so clear,
That I have noticed comes true every time.
Such a simple saying with a meaning sincere,
Left deep impression on my mind, in my prime,

Just one line and here is what he said to me.
He said, “A new broom always sweeps so clean“.
At first not knowing what he meant in any degree.
In just a little while, I understood what he did mean.

If you have ever swept any floor with a new broom,
Then you know the ease of flowing dirt in those piles.
With an older broom, it takes longer to groom.
Along with it might seem like traveling miles.

Humanity terms it means, a new person works hard,
To prove maybe their worth, in a new position held.
Though after time they seem to fade, playing a card,
Then they seem to fade into the shadows and quelled.



quote " A New Broom always sweeps clean"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 10:32 PM
Hey, you taught me a new one tonight. I'd never heard this phrase before, Cecil and you showed it very well. Congrats on your fine win. Luv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 11:27 AM
Congratulations Cecil on your win in Joe Flach's contest "In Other Words". Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 7:44 PM
A lot of truth here. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 5:43 PM
good one, congrats on your win in the contest
Mehta Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 5:10 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest, Cecil
Sweetheart Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 4:00 PM
Congrats Cecil on your winning poem in Joe's contest.. wise words and an enjoyable read.. super piece my friend.. enjoy your win and weekend with luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 10:31 PM
Perfect analogy Cecil in your poem with the broom.. very creative and perfectly rhymed to the reader's sweet taste of the message... enjoyed my friend on this happy weekend.. with luv..
Culverhouse Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 7:34 AM
not always...think of obama...LOL well written!
Mehta Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 4:08 AM
A nice write on the old quotte well expressed, Cecil
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