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A Nest In Your Dream

'I'll build a nest in your hair' / and plant some little trees in your garden / so don't despair // and when the morning is up at your windows / I'll be the musk scent in the breeze blows // your eyes will water the tiny forest / thinking of me hidden in that hairy nest // I'll bring your coffee and my decaf / you'll light a cigarette and I'll cough / for both the trees and on your behalf // cause you are the lyrics of this silly song / don't tell me what's right as I don't know what's wrong

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/5/2015 7:57:00 AM

Welcome to the Soup, so far for me I have enjoyed this first posting the most. Sorry you didn't connect with my broken people poem. Have a look through some of my others perhaps something might be of interest or perhaps not. Either way I hope you enjoy your time here.

Asma Memon

Date: 3/31/2015 5:36:00 PM

Appealing title, great work- must say (Y)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2015 10:56:00 AM

Outstanding title Che, :), this is A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2015 10:55:00 AM

PS....... I see you are a new poet. That's very rude of me. I don't see my welcome on the bottom. PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2015 10:54:00 AM

Where you at Che, are you not a poet? I am formless when it comes to writing, cut-cut, my poems have no format, so I am not much of a critique. Either I like it or not. Which brings me to appreciate the smoothness and funny thought in this write! "I'll be the musk scent in the breeze blows." Awesome line! LINDA

Che Fontana
Date: 3/19/2015 3:16:00 PM

Thank you, Linda see you around hugs Che

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2015 3:42:00 PM

Hi Che, about my poem it is not a HAIKU :). Thanks for asking. It was a delight having you over on my page :). How about you posting another poem. SKAT

Che Fontana
Date: 3/16/2015 1:11:00 PM

Already done Of course it's not a haiku but it creates the linguistic atmosphere of some sort of it

Skat A

Date: 3/14/2015 7:27:00 PM

Che, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Che Fontana
Date: 3/14/2015 11:57:00 PM

Hah, nice touch! Thanks for the welcome comment Well, let's seeee

Kenisha Shines

Date: 3/13/2015 10:59:00 AM

nice write.

Che Fontana
Date: 3/14/2015 2:32:00 AM

Here we go Thanks, Kenisha