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A Needle In Your Eye

Nothing's worse than a needle in your eye Cringing is unavoidable as I try not to cry Open them up Wish you luck It won't hurt a bit, well at least you won't die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/18/2019 11:28:00 AM
Hi Jack. Ouch is all I got to say. Thanks for sharing this
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/18/2019 11:49:00 AM
Ouch indeed!!! It was a procedure to medically save his sight! CRAP!!! Good day Greg! Any more snow? LOL
Date: 11/18/2019 8:02:00 AM
Seriously! Makes me think every time my finger gets plunged into the dog's eye- she doesn't bat a lash... I'd be rolling on the ground! Different pain receptors. ;D, xomo!
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Date: 11/18/2019 8:19:00 AM
YIKES!!! Me too... my son-in-law has diabetes and this proceedure was necessary to save his sight! CRAP wish I hadn't written this!!!! Have a sweet day, sweet Mo! Love, Happy Jack XOX
Date: 11/18/2019 7:57:00 AM
Heard of a needle in a haystack, never that one lol.
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Date: 11/18/2019 8:20:00 AM
The EYE??? True story!!!

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