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A Need To Go Back

need to go back return to winnie the pooh, cinderella, hide and go seek at dusk screaming, giggling beneath the sun’s ruddy demise Marshall, laying in the ditch. out of sight I run right over him trying to reach home, home where there was safety, when I believed in the magic of god because in my understanding he was the magic one a magician like the wizard of oz jumping from the hay loft almost convinced you could, honest to god, fly away from fear if you were only able to just …….

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Date: 7/24/2019 9:38:00 PM
This is so powerful. What makes it even more immediate is that the author is a true poet. Is 'Marshall' a pet or...? So very sad, yet I feel privileged to have read it.
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Date: 8/12/2017 12:45:00 AM
The quatrains are just spilling over with regrets. Shrouded in mystery, it.invites.me to want to swop stories with you. My regrets...ouch too
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Date: 8/11/2017 4:26:00 PM
Hi Patricia , beautiful write feeling of passed times ::)))) hugs
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/11/2017 4:28:00 PM
They are memories that stand out for me. I am happy that you enjoyed them Thanks
Date: 8/11/2017 12:55:00 PM
Reliving those joyous days... ah sweet memories! I was ne of the fortunate ons... enjoyed my life to the fullest! Love this one dear Patricia! Love, Jack xxx
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Date: 8/11/2017 4:15:00 AM
What a glorious write this one is Patricia! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious poem this morning! You have delighted me by your piece of the past, where it would be fun to enter the realms of the past yet again! Great Work!!
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