Notes About The Poem

For the Write Eight Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest,
Sponsored by Constance La France

Though it is eternal, each mauve sunrise, hope is
born anew. - by Poet

A Naturally Beautiful Outlook

An island sunset, when mango moon is calling, Lush palm fronds sway, when the day is stalling. Ivory tailed comet, comes but once in a lifetime, Sitting in tropical sunset, at just the right time. Gemmed hummingbird sparkle. Destiny dreams. Pink sun is roving. Glossy crows' feathers gleam. What was left behind, is often recalled to mind; Yet, plum fate isn't unkind, as love again you find.
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 10:51 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write and quote again. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away............
Buehler Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 8:37 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed this, Paula. Thank you very much for your kind thoughts. :)
Tor Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 12:04 AM
Such a beautiful scenic melody of words describing the beauty of the Sunset deserving of a Winning place in this contest Evelyn. Big Congratulations for such a beautifully written gem and for your deserving win. God bless you and Congratulations again!!!
Buehler Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 2:49 PM
Thank you for your very kind words of congratulations, my friend. They bring joy and smiles. I hiope your day is nice. :)
Kauffman Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 11:10 AM
Lush and luscious as "an island sunset," Evelyn. Love lost and love found in a paradise of color and movement! Love the life "when day is stalling!" Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
Buehler Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 4:12 PM
Sam, I appreciate your warm remarks very much. I hope your week is nice. Blessings to you, my friend. :)
Miller Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 2:50 AM
Very beautiful, congratulations
Buehler Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 4:03 PM
Thanks so much, Terry.
mysore Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 9:19 PM
mango moon! ivory tailed comet, pink sun, plum fate Oh lovely imagery gifted friend. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Buehler Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 4:02 PM
Deepest, heartfelt thanks for your very kind words, Thriveni. Very best wishes. :)
Fowler Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 6:18 PM
Positively uplifting write Evelyn. Congratulations! :)
Buehler Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 8:07 PM
Your warm congratulations are so appreciated, Linda. Thank you. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 2:15 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write and quote. Pretty sunset picture. What a great time of the day. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed weekend writing away..............
Buehler Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 3:46 PM
Thank you so much for the smiles, Paula. Your words always inspire and delight. I hope your weekend is wonderful. :)
Greenhough Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 4:46 PM
I enjoy this sublime theme with hint of romance. It is very beautiful indeed.
Buehler Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 6:17 PM
Thank you so much for the joy of your comment. :)
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 2:40 AM
- A beautifully described place where love can truly flourish, Evelyn :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 2:07 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely thoughts and well wishes, Anne-Lise. I hope your day is nice, too. hugs :)
Buhagiar Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 2:26 AM
A wonderful poem. Evelyn. Your style is always alluring.
Buehler Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 2:04 PM
I very much appreciate your gladdening response. I hope your day is nice. :)
Rolland Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 6:08 PM
delicious poetry, images are brilliant, you are so talented my friend
Buehler Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 2:00 PM
Your wonderful compliments are received with joy and thanks, my friend. :)
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