A Nasty Young Thug

There was a bully in my young childhood Who wasn't really interested in brotherhood Sooner fight than hug A nasty young thug Perhaps his meanness was because of his limp wood
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Cresswell Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 11:37 AM
Sorry you were bullied. Perhaps That is why you are so kind.
Ellison Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 3:33 PM
You say the sweetest thing, dear Patricia... what are you doing later tonight??? xxx
Flats Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Limp-wooded thug? Hmm, a riddle?//Had difficulty poking with piddle?//It may be amiss//But I think of this//as a failure to hey diddle diddle. HUG ON JACKIE BOY!!!
Ellison Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 3:35 PM
HEY DIDDLE DIDLLE Sir John John!!! LOL Hugs, Jackie!!!
Sivey Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 6:48 AM
Ha! That would do it, they try to make up for what they are missing in life, and can be extremely mean in the process! I believe that you have hit the nail on the "head" with this one! What a grand job my friend! You have delighted me to no end with this incredible poem this morning, what a funny piece, Great Work Jackson!!
Ellison Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 6:51 AM
There's one in every crowd, eh! They're trying to make up for their "short comings"!!!
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