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A Nasty Young Thug

There was a bully in my young childhood Who wasn't really interested in brotherhood Sooner fight than hug A nasty young thug Perhaps his meanness was because of his limp wood

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/22/2017 11:37:00 AM

Sorry you were bullied. Perhaps That is why you are so kind.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/22/2017 3:33:00 PM

You say the sweetest thing, dear Patricia... what are you doing later tonight??? xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 8/22/2017 7:49:00 AM

Limp-wooded thug? Hmm, a riddle?//Had difficulty poking with piddle?//It may be amiss//But I think of this//as a failure to hey diddle diddle. HUG ON JACKIE BOY!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/22/2017 3:35:00 PM

HEY DIDDLE DIDLLE Sir John John!!! LOL Hugs, Jackie!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/22/2017 6:48:00 AM

Ha! That would do it, they try to make up for what they are missing in life, and can be extremely mean in the process! I believe that you have hit the nail on the "head" with this one! What a grand job my friend! You have delighted me to no end with this incredible poem this morning, what a funny piece, Great Work Jackson!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/22/2017 6:51:00 AM

There's one in every crowd, eh! They're trying to make up for their "short comings"!!!