Victor Buhagiar Poet Free verse

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A Mystic Place To Live ------ Potd

Haphazardly, 	
Infinity and affinity mingled, 
In an asymmetry imbalance.

A dishevelled universe, 
Grew and shrank as fire devoured, 
Yet ice sustained.

Outrages currents swirled,
Straightened, dispersed, and garnered,
Dissipated into nothing, 
Only to surge again and again and again.

Until a soft soothing spirit unfurled itself, 
Protracting into every nook,
Fire and ice detached their selves 
Into their proper assumed place,

Light and darkness found their proper place. 
How harmonious was creation now!

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M. L. Kiser June 27, 2021 at 8:09 PM Great description, congratulations on your POTD!

Kim Rodrigues June 24, 2021 at 6:18 PM Back with congrats on POTD!

Jennifer Proxenos June 22, 2021 at 12:33 PM Hi Victor, This is a masterpiece my friend - congratulations on POTD - i'm sure you enjoyed the honor bestowed on you. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 22, 2021 at 6:34 AM - Congratulations on your very beautiful p.o.t.d., Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. June 21, 2021 at 6:24 AM WoW! Victor, This is beautiful! Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Brandy Nicole June 20, 2021 at 6:37 PM "Light and darkness found their proper place" Yes, I completely agree. My heart rejoices in the fact that God is in control. Of everything. Your thoughts curl gently around me. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy

Eve Roper June 20, 2021 at 5:41 PM Victor, congratulations on POTD, great imagery and feel. Hugs Eve

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 20, 2021 at 4:10 PM I'm back with congratulations on POTD, Victor. You did an amazing job in creating this extraordinary verse. :=)

W.A. Cholt June 20, 2021 at 1:38 PM A sense of disorder and chaos settling into harmony. Nicely written. Congratulations on POTD.

Quoth Theraven June 20, 2021 at 1:03 PM Victor, I hope you won't mind if I pretend this POTD is for your other recent poem. Though I enjoyed 'Fire and ice detached their selves ~ Into their proper assumed place,'. I so loved your 'pale-yellow cowslips' dancing their 'lonely jig to the tune of the wayward breeze' And ending stanza's lasting questions. 'Still do the bells toll? ~ Why? ~ What for? ~ My heart knows, of course. ~ I find a shade, I kneel, I pray. ~~ Let the bells toll. ~ I've heard as cowslips bend their heads'. -Richard Victor Buhagiar June 20, 2021 at 1:33 PM I don't mind. I have some good poems I thought I'd get the best, but I loved writing the cowslips. I don't normally like my own poem, but this one I loved.

L Milton Hankins June 20, 2021 at 11:12 AM Well-composed free verse, Victor. Congratulations on POTD!

Unseeking Seeker June 20, 2021 at 10:20 AM Great write, Victor! Congrats on POTD!

Paula Goldsmith June 20, 2021 at 8:57 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed this story. Hope you will enjoy your day with blessings................

Jenna Logan June 20, 2021 at 7:57 AM From imbalance to harmony you've taken your readers. Nicely composed and congratulations on your POTD, Victor!

Heidi Sands June 20, 2021 at 7:37 AM Congratulations for POTD :)

Joanna Daniel June 20, 2021 at 7:17 AM Glad to see this well thought out poem get a deserved POTD, Victor:) congratulations:)

Sotto Poet June 20, 2021 at 6:36 AM Congratulations on your POTD with this featured prose. You've earned it, particularly with this well-written poetry. Enjoy your day

Beryl Edmonds June 20, 2021 at 5:29 AM A wonder and a mystery is what the creator did and gave us all a beautiful place where we could live. Congratulations on poem of the day Victor, enjoy the honour, enjoy the day… Belle

Tania Kitchin June 20, 2021 at 5:11 AM Victor, nicely done, congratulations on POTD!

Joseph May June 20, 2021 at 4:23 AM Wonderful write Victor, Congrats on POTD

Vijay Pandit June 20, 2021 at 4:17 AM Back with congrats Victor on poem of the day. Enjoy the day!

Rama Balasubramanian June 20, 2021 at 1:33 AM Congratulations on your well deserved Potd! Enjoy the weekend.

Tom Cunningham June 20, 2021 at 12:54 AM Back with congratulations Victor on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom Victor Buhagiar June 20, 2021 at 12:56 AM Thank you, Tom.

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 19, 2021 at 11:45 AM Creation is harmonious indeed, with God at the center of it. I enjoyed these beautiful, inspiring words. Enjoy your weekend, my friend. :)

Connie Marcum Wong June 19, 2021 at 10:44 AM How beautifully you convey creation Victor. You chose a glorious photo to share as seen from above the clouds. We are divine beings living on a divine planet we all need to appreciate. Blessings xxoo

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