A Mysterious World

As I look around 
this unfamiliar place

I see no one 
only his holy face 

lights shining 
oh so bright

with glitter sparkling
in the day light

the golden beams
and platinum seams

cotton wool like atmosphere 
i breathe
deeply

diamond throne of pure existence
Violet Velvet robes capture my soul 

as i see four white doves 
fly ahead in the distance

Wait for me, I shout and cry
but
nothing
no reply

everything is perfect 
and so sacred 

i hear a voice up ahead
you are clean 
new
and full of life
welcome home my child
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 4:56 PM
Beautiful, creative write, Maree..I imagine your joy as you wrote this! Read my, "Soft Wind" I think you'll enjoy it too. Have a great weekend. God bless. Love, Annalise
Mehta Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 4:35 AM
Very inspiring and enjoyable write, Maree
Nutter Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 3:11 AM
thank you for this eye opening and uplifting poem.
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