A Mutiny

Lived eight years in a retirement community Best eight years, so thankful for the opportunity Elderly ladies clamoured around me Best looking oldster they ever did see Had to beat them off with a stick to avoid a mutiny Never too old!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 7, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Picture Jack as the attraction//picture our Jackson in action!//on second thought//you'd better not//You just might end up in traction. GOOD MORNING JACKSON!!!
Ellison Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 8:01 AM
Lims are fun eh!!! Tim Smith is the new "King of Limericks" You seem to be another challenger! LOL Good Morning John John!!!!
Smith Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 9:52 AM
A beard and a smile go a long way...Pushing back the fillies every day...redhead or brown...never a frown...all they want is little Jack to play...
Ellison Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Seems like you know me all to well... and at my age!!! Jays are going to push the Rangers aside... no problem! Cheers!!!
Allison Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 9:45 AM
ha ha ha - I bet Cathie was would beat you with a stick if you tried lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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October 6, 2016 at 9:38 AM
Just don't tell her... OK? I'm very BROAD minded... she's not!!! LOL Love and hugs, Brother Jack xxx
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