A Mutiny

Lived eight years in a retirement community Best eight years, so thankful for the opportunity Elderly ladies clamoured around me Best looking oldster they ever did see Had to beat them off with a stick to avoid a mutiny Never too old!

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/7/2016 7:56:00 AM

Picture Jack as the attraction//picture our Jackson in action!//on second thought//you'd better not//You just might end up in traction. GOOD MORNING JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/7/2016 8:01:00 AM

Lims are fun eh!!! Tim Smith is the new "King of Limericks" You seem to be another challenger! LOL Good Morning John John!!!!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/5/2016 9:52:00 AM

A beard and a smile go a long way...Pushing back the fillies every day...redhead or brown...never a frown...all they want is little Jack to play...

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/6/2016 9:36:00 AM

Seems like you know me all to well... and at my age!!! Jays are going to push the Rangers aside... no problem! Cheers!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/5/2016 9:45:00 AM

ha ha ha - I bet Cathie was would beat you with a stick if you tried lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/6/2016 9:38:00 AM

Just don't tell her... OK? I'm very BROAD minded... she's not!!! LOL Love and hugs, Brother Jack xxx