A Muted Path

Like a jazz tune holding its own slow note Quietly falls Muted steps along path written 9-21-2019 Make It Five Poetry Contest 3rd place
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Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 2:34 PM
wow this one is quite amazing!! One of my favorites on the winner list!!
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 2:27 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chiri Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 9:56 PM
Jeanne congrats on a great win!;)
May Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 9:05 PM
Wonderful write Jeanne, Congrats on your win..
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 8:50 PM
A beauty! Love the pic too!
Ligon Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 6:22 PM
This is beautiful.
There Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 9:00 PM
Very creative ~ an awesome interpretation of this picture!!
Andresen Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 2:03 PM
Lovely written, Jeanne ... almost as I can hear his footsteps creak in the snow - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 9:49 AM
At least they are on the path. ;0) You created the right mood with this piece and picture.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 10:58 PM
I have no idea what "make it five" is but I think you have a winner my friend.
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