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A Muted Path

Like a jazz tune holding its own slow note Quietly falls Muted steps along path written 9-21-2019 Make It Five Poetry Contest 3rd place

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Date: 9/29/2019 2:34:00 PM

wow this one is quite amazing!! One of my favorites on the winner list!!

Date: 9/27/2019 2:27:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 9/26/2019 9:56:00 PM

Jeanne congrats on a great win!;)

Date: 9/26/2019 9:05:00 PM

Wonderful write Jeanne, Congrats on your win..

Date: 9/24/2019 8:50:00 PM

A beauty! Love the pic too!

Date: 9/23/2019 6:22:00 PM

This is beautiful.

Date: 9/22/2019 9:00:00 PM

Very creative ~ an awesome interpretation of this picture!!

Date: 9/22/2019 2:03:00 PM

Lovely written, Jeanne ... almost as I can hear his footsteps creak in the snow - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 9/22/2019 9:49:00 AM

At least they are on the path. ;0) You created the right mood with this piece and picture.

Date: 9/21/2019 10:58:00 PM

I have no idea what "make it five" is but I think you have a winner my friend.