A Must

Eventually it all turns into dust Love, passion and even lust You may think this is not just But that’s the way it all goes It’s a must!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2015 9:31:00 PM

Love yours! Congrats in the contest.

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/11/2015 9:18:00 PM

Thank you,Andrea, so much :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2015 2:54:00 PM

((())) Puppy Love Congrats! :>) SK

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/11/2015 9:18:00 PM

Thank you, Sara :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/7/2015 8:11:00 AM

Well said, congrats.

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/11/2015 9:17:00 PM

Thank you,Richard :)

James Inman

Date: 8/7/2015 8:05:00 AM

Unique take on the theme. Well done, Mohamed.

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/11/2015 9:16:00 PM

Thank you,James, so much :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/7/2015 4:35:00 AM

many congrats Mohamed:-) hugs jan xx

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/11/2015 9:15:00 PM

Thank you,Jan, so much :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/7/2015 1:01:00 AM

Congrats on a thoughtful win, Mohamed. Regards, Viv

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/11/2015 9:15:00 PM

Thank you,Viv, so much :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/7/2015 12:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Mohamed! Very romantic write that I enjoyed reading! It's all about Puppy Love! Pandita

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/11/2015 9:14:00 PM

Thank you,Pandita, so much and glad you enjoyed it :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/7/2015 12:12:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning sweet write Mohamed, rhymes well!

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/11/2015 9:17:00 PM

Thank you,Dr.Upma, so much :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/6/2015 8:11:00 PM

Yes the reality of puppy love turning older, nicely done.

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/11/2015 9:12:00 PM

well, it's the fate of every living thing! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/15/2015 7:01:00 PM

Very good, Mohamed. Blessings eve

Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/11/2015 9:11:00 PM

Thank you, Eve :)

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 1/4/2015 10:14:00 AM

The best! -Safa

Mohamed Adel
Date: 1/4/2015 10:23:00 AM

Thank you Safa, glad you liked it :)