Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

A Musical Love

Clothes all wrinkled on the floor...
A pathway of roses to my door...
Like a sweet wine tasting, we sip...
Tasting each others love on our lips...
The radio is off but there are musical sounds...
Our voices harmonize as our bodies lie down...
As our toes curl in passion we melt into the sheets...
The temperatures outside are cool but in the bedroom
it is all about the heat...


Erotica contest....by F.H.
written by Michael J. Falotico
10/24/11

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Craig Schaber November 13, 2011 at 7:44 AM very good poem loved it

Poet Destroyer A November 5, 2011 at 10:49 PM michael;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich November 3, 2011 at 9:18 PM I just KNEW he would like this. A big congratulations to you, Michael.

John Smith November 3, 2011 at 6:20 PM Evocative erotica. Congratulations on your win.

Nancy Jones November 2, 2011 at 4:47 PM and the beat goes on... nice on, Michael, grats. Namaste~N

Carol Sunshine Brown November 2, 2011 at 10:27 AM Congratulations on your win in Frank's "Erotica" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 2, 2011 at 10:12 AM Congrats Michael luv on a fantastic win with this visual delight for the contest luv.. always special are your wonderful words of luv and emotion and passion..now your J.G. needs a cold shower ..

Dinda Minardi November 2, 2011 at 9:30 AM Congrats on your win, Michael :)

David Williams November 2, 2011 at 7:54 AM Michael congrats on your win, cool and sexy poem..loved it my friend..David

M.I.A . October 30, 2011 at 4:42 PM Wow indeed! 'Tasting each others love on our lips...' says it all. best wishes always.

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2011 at 4:35 PM wow, LOVE it!

Elizabeth Wesley October 25, 2011 at 8:43 AM Such subtle passion expressed by a true lover. How I enjoy this. oooooh!

Zzzzz Zzzzz October 24, 2011 at 10:28 AM Erotic but tasteful write. You got the balance right! Some good, poetic lines here. Good luck in the contest. Robert.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 24, 2011 at 10:18 AM oh yes.. oh more than yes,,Michael luv.. this is a hot number and erotica plus poetry luv.. good luck in Frank's contest.. the heat will rise to the top for sure.. new fav for the "Sweetheart" .. xoxo..J.G. in heat now..haha..

Kash Poet October 24, 2011 at 9:42 AM feeling the heat.An enjoyable write.Best wishes in the contest Michael.

Cory Long October 24, 2011 at 9:19 AM wow, that is great!!! I love it! how are things going? cory

Shannon Deane October 24, 2011 at 9:05 AM Knocked off my feet, truly fantastic write...best of luck in the contest...luv shannon

Dinda Minardi October 24, 2011 at 8:50 AM Woohhooo... I sweat a bit while reading this... you transferred the heat in gracious way -Well, as always...- :)