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A Muse Died

I couldn't run from this Muse She stands there Over twilight Screams on me; Create! I couldn't run Her voice aching, crashing my fragile heart. She got those dreamy eyes, Forced my veins to dream! I made a braid from her echo and i said; it's a poem! Then all my dreams, become bald! I couldn't run the land gone frozen Under her toes! Where is the wings?! I can't see the feathers. Her face gone blue, Have been colored by Rainbow's colors! My pen gone frozen between her breasts! and died quietly. O history, mark that A muse died here, in my heart! Everything gone frozen, when she gone even my shadow ran, and gone frozen! I will lay down, among my devastating castle, And cry alone. On the rising of one day's sun A rose gave me a hug saying; Only fire and flames Can bring the pen from death. I asked; Where i could find a flames A kingdom gone frozen! The rose answered; Follow that man, Only his eyes will put a fever inside of you.

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Date: 9/20/2016 5:54:00 PM
wow, enjoyed. ----skat
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Madonna Agaiby
Date: 9/21/2016 1:51:00 AM
Thank you my dear :))
Date: 9/20/2016 1:29:00 PM
well done, Madonna. LINDA
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Madonna Agaiby
Date: 9/21/2016 1:52:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Lida :)) <3
Date: 9/20/2016 6:54:00 AM
Muse in the braid, muse in his eyes ... lovely blue sky in your lyrical write ...
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Madonna Agaiby
Date: 9/20/2016 10:26:00 AM
I'm really grateful, Thank you :))
Date: 9/20/2016 3:30:00 AM
quite an original idea told eloquently.Great write Madonna.
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Madonna Agaiby
Date: 9/20/2016 5:35:00 AM
Thank you! :))
Date: 9/20/2016 3:06:00 AM
On the rising of one day's sun A rose gave me a hug saying; Only fire and flames Can bring the pen from death. Such vivid imagery. A great poem Madonna.
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Madonna Agaiby
Date: 9/20/2016 3:10:00 AM
Thank you so much??

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