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Raindrops splash against the glass with a pitter-patter sound. And as the hours slowly pass water saturates the ground where muddy puddles abound. Clouds dappled purple and gray roll across a murky sky. And upon this gloomy day dejected birds will not fly, reluctant to even try. Shadows pool in silhouette, drowning colors starved of light. Everything is soaking wet, giving the wind its sharp bite as a shy sun slinks from sight. I struggle to shake the blues and keep the doldrums at bay. For my melancholy muse is not in the mood to play, on such a depressing day. (Rhyme) 8/9/2015

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Date: 5/14/2018 10:17:00 PM
Lovely, especially the last stanza. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 5/15/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/9/2015 1:25:00 PM
your imagery is wonderful hugs eve 7
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Date: 8/9/2015 2:26:00 PM
Thanks Eve, as always I truly appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 8/9/2015 12:57:00 PM
Ahh!! I believe that the muse visited you unawares..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 8/9/2015 2:27:00 PM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your comments as well as your support. Emile.
Date: 8/9/2015 11:53:00 AM
Dear Emile, Awesome poem and imagery:-) Good luck for the contest love, Anu:-)
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Date: 8/9/2015 12:41:00 PM
Thanks Anulaxmi, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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