A Murky Sky

Raindrops splash against the glass, with a pitter-patter sound. And the storm is slow to pass while the rain pummels the ground where muddy puddles abound. Thunder clouds, purple and gray, roll across a murky sky. And on this dank, dreary day, dejected birds, will not fly: hesitant to even try. Shadows pool in silhouette, shading colors starved of light. And everything is all wet: giving the wind its sharp bite, as a sad sun slinks from sight. I struggle to shake the blues and keep the doldrums at bay. For my melancholy muse is not in the mood to play: on such a depressing day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 10:17 PM
Lovely, especially the last stanza. Well done, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 1:25 PM
your imagery is wonderful hugs eve 7
Pinet Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 2:26 PM
Thanks Eve, as always I truly appreciate your support. Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 12:57 PM
Ahh!! I believe that the muse visited you unawares..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Pinet Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 2:27 PM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your comments as well as your support. Emile.
Nayak Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 11:53 AM
Dear Emile, Awesome poem and imagery:-) Good luck for the contest love, Anu:-)
Pinet Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 12:41 PM
Thanks Anulaxmi, I appreciate your support. Emile.
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