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Poetry,they will dissect you ignoring poet's bleeding heart, a judgement today for you too, poetry, they will dissect you! So many knives to cut you through a bleeding heart will fall apart. Poetry they will dissect you ignoring poet's bleeding heart! ===============000================ Contest-TRIOLET Form-TRIOLET : A French verse form. Its rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB and all lines are in iambic tetrameter; the first, fourth and seventh lines are identical, as are the second and final lines, thereby making the initial and final couplets identical as well. The features of the Triolet are: 8 lines. Two rhymes. 5 of the 8 lines are repeated or refrain lines. First line repeats at the 4th and 7th lines. Second line repeats at the 8th line. Rhyme scheme (where an upper-case letter indicates the appearance of an identical line, while a lower-case letter indicates a rhyme with each line designated by the same lower-case or upper-case letter) ==================000==================
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A   Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 9:34 PM
I got one word for you KASH..... .. WOW! ........................PD
Hendricks Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 1:26 PM
I notice from the comments below that you won a contest with this one. I'm not surprised, Kash. I admire people who try different forms and then manage to carry it off well, as you did here. Well done, my friend. Licia :-)
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 5:45 PM
Hey, kash. Glad you liked my choco mama. Are you a choco papa??
Anglesey Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 8:37 PM
Well written and very well expressed. I really like the unique creativity. Well done :)
Minardi Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 7:48 AM
woww.. this one has dissected me..
Onclaud Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 2:38 PM
kashi bud, when do i see you again?.. awhhh!..:) huggs
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 11:53 PM
long time no see here at Soup, Kash, Miss your routine visits!!!
Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 11:49 PM
WOW, what a great theme you chose for yours. I think you really deserved to win this contest. I do not know how you placed because I only am seeing congrats to you below. You deserved a high place with this one.
A   Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 2:52 PM
Hi Kash, , congratulations!! awesome "Triolet" ... xox~ LINDA :-)
A   Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 9:29 AM
I must had miss this contest... congratulations... xox..Linda
Onclaud Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 2:48 AM
wowowow, congrats dear kashi bud!..:) huggs
Anglesey Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 9:08 PM
Wow...a very poetic and edgy verse that follows a stunning title . Well done :)
Chircop Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 2:58 PM
powerful and clever kash.Hope you are doing fine kash.My baby girl just turned one two days ago : )..and did quite a few steps on her own today : )
Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 4:06 PM
Like the theme..Congrats on your great work.Sara
A  Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 5:44 PM
amazing win...SKAT
Johnson Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 6:57 PM
Well said. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Onclaud Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 10:19 AM
hello, kashi... come visit!..:) huggs
Morgan Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 8:37 AM
wow! truly a great piece, how can i even compete with that, but compete i must and try, this is surely top 3! good luck
Morgan Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 8:39 AM
Dnt mind if i copy yr poem. . . trying to do it but need an example to follow the pattern and yours is perfect. . .
Onclaud Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 6:58 AM
kashi, this is so powerful and well rendered!... bow!...:)
Onclaud Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 6:59 AM
huggggs!
Sivey Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 6:47 AM
This is a wonderful Triolet my friend, and it is an honor to have have had the chance to read this exceptional poem here Kashi! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous piece this morning! What an outstanding poem, Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 3:44 AM
- woow... good Kash !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 1:06 AM
well done, my friend, and on a timely topic. Is it your first triolet? I think you may have tried this form before?
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