A Multitude of Stars

A cold clear winter’s night a multitude of stars overhead, too often we are blinded by our own light.

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Doug Vinson

Date: 3/21/2017 10:35:00 PM

Nice, Dave, and so true - there may be a great struggle to get free of ourselves enough to be aware of many precious things around us.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/22/2017 7:47:00 PM

Thanks Doug

Daniel Schack

Date: 3/11/2017 7:35:00 AM

this one, nice and simple. please see my poems under daniel schack, on the soup.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/11/2017 2:44:00 PM

Thanks Daniel

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/10/2017 1:55:00 PM

...far too often :-) I love this, wonderful meaning and imagery. Stars are amazing, so nicely done :-) blessings, lynn

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/10/2017 3:38:00 PM

Thanks Lynn

Paul Callus

Date: 2/8/2017 1:35:00 PM

Short, but very meaningful, Dave. Superb ending. Regards // paul

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/9/2017 12:35:00 PM

Thanks Paul, at times it's good to get away from the city.

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/31/2017 7:03:00 AM

Very rich poem ... wonderful ...

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/31/2017 11:39:00 AM

Thanks Probir