A Moving Bowl

a moving bowl
under the shining moon....
his bald head
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 10, 2011 at 9:19 PM
LOL! like mr.palmario there, i was curious what it'd be also and when you're talking bout a head, simply enjoyed it!
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November 9, 2011 at 1:06 AM
haha I was wondering what "a moving bowl" meant-- very funny, kash! and cool about the alu bomb-- new word leanred for me today ;) & haha hmmm not meaning to sound snobbish, but Philippine carabao mangoes are the best ;) heehee :D
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November 8, 2011 at 1:26 AM
This is such fun, Kash! It reminds me of the hair cut my son got in the Philippines..his uncle placed a bowl on his head and cut a cute lil pixie cut. How fun.
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November 4, 2011 at 9:52 PM
this is really COOL, Kash!! I love it. By the way, it's shining. Not shinning. LUv, Andrea
Sivey Avatar
November 4, 2011 at 2:47 PM
Hmmm...I understand...I have a mostly bald head...am I a moving bowl too? Ha ha ha! Great Haiku!!
Kendrick Avatar
November 4, 2011 at 2:42 PM
Cute one.I got a chuckle...Enjoyed reading your work..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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November 4, 2011 at 1:30 PM
:) Big laughs for this poem, Kash! Our governor is bald and he'd shine like a cue ball under a full moon. Way to go! Love, Carolyn
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November 4, 2011 at 1:19 PM
Hey, I resemble that remark. Tony
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