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a moving bowl

a moving bowl under the shining moon.... his bald head

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/10/2011 9:19:00 PM
LOL! like mr.palmario there, i was curious what it'd be also and when you're talking bout a head, simply enjoyed it!
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Date: 11/9/2011 1:06:00 AM
haha I was wondering what "a moving bowl" meant-- very funny, kash! and cool about the alu bomb-- new word leanred for me today ;) & haha hmmm not meaning to sound snobbish, but Philippine carabao mangoes are the best ;) heehee :D
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Date: 11/8/2011 1:26:00 AM
This is such fun, Kash! It reminds me of the hair cut my son got in the Philippines..his uncle placed a bowl on his head and cut a cute lil pixie cut. How fun.
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Date: 11/4/2011 9:52:00 PM
this is really COOL, Kash!! I love it. By the way, it's shining. Not shinning. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/4/2011 2:47:00 PM
Hmmm...I understand...I have a mostly bald head...am I a moving bowl too? Ha ha ha! Great Haiku!!
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Date: 11/4/2011 2:42:00 PM
Cute one.I got a chuckle...Enjoyed reading your work..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 11/4/2011 1:30:00 PM
:) Big laughs for this poem, Kash! Our governor is bald and he'd shine like a cue ball under a full moon. Way to go! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/4/2011 1:19:00 PM
Hey, I resemble that remark. Tony
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