A Mouth Watering Epulaeryu

Ah! Mouth watering dishes,
Lots of Good Wishes,
With some Pickled Pepper, Mint - 
Greenish-yellow tint,
Crispy, Creamy, Pie,
World’s Frankest,
BURRRRRP!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 6:45 AM
Enjoyed your take on this theme, quite unique when compared to the others. Well done! congrats on your fine win. // paul
Allison Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 4:04 AM
dropping back with my congrats - made me giggle again:-) hugs Jan xx
Rv Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 4:05 AM
Thank you dear Jan!
Dietrich Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 11:38 PM
At first I was a bit grossed out by the burp. hahaha. But i like the touch of colors you describe for this food. I am very curious to know what it is. At first I thought something different until I saw the word "pie" Very interesting epulaeryu, dear. Congratulations in my contest.
Smith Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 6:19 AM
I had to chuckle at the burp...nice compliment to the meal..hugs Tim
Rv Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 6:39 AM
Thanks a lot!(I could have made it more tempting) Feel honored to get a comment from you!!
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 5:25 AM
Lovely poem love the humourous ending:-) Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx
Rv Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 6:41 AM
Thanks a lot!! You enter the contest too!
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