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A Mouse Family's Christmas

It's Christmas Eve and through the house there creeps a curious little mouse. He climbs into the big arm chair and finds the cookies waiting there . He only takes the smallest bite. Santa will find his treat tonight. He gazes with wonder at the tree and the bright wrapped gifts left there to be a mystery tale to tell his spouse, when he gets home, this curious mouse. What an adventure it has been, he has drunk of some spilled gin that had been left upon the table. His wife will think it is a fable he has concocted to amuse her. She is homebound, we must excuse her. He once came home all out of breath to say he had been scared to death by a huge rat with fluffy tail. She noticed he was very pale. "While I was nibbling off some cheese to bring to you, my love, to please, he almost had me in his paws. I'm sure he wasn't Santa Claus". But this night is so very quiet. He spies some fruitcake, has to try it. It reminds him of that sip of gin and wonders if his head will spin. He hears a noise, runs for his life, carrying fruitcake for his wife. Christmas morning, spread before their eyes for the baby mice, a grand surprise. Their mama had fixed a Christmas feast from food their dad had saved from beast. A bit of butter, a glob of jam and a fairly good-sized piece of ham. Bread crumbs saved from other forays. They had enough to eat for days. Those little mice would never waste it. If they didn't like it, they'd still taste it. This food their mama set before them, their dad risked his life to get it for them. 11/22/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/29/2016 10:42:00 PM
Joyce, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest Blog "Beautiful, But Fragile" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/7/2014 5:07:00 AM
Joyce a most appealing story for children congrats on win hugs
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Date: 12/6/2014 10:31:00 PM
Mouse amusement,a very brilliant one Joyce; congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 12/6/2014 8:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful Christmas story with a great lesson Joyce.
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Date: 12/6/2014 1:54:00 PM
Very cute, Joyce! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/6/2014 11:05:00 AM
I'm with Debbie a 7 and a fav. Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 12/6/2014 7:57:00 AM
This was fun, congrats!
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Date: 12/6/2014 7:15:00 AM
Nice allegorical story, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/5/2014 9:17:00 PM
wonderful original tale!! a 7 & a fav Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/5/2014 5:25:00 PM
A lovely story Joyce...congrats on your win
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Date: 12/5/2014 4:03:00 PM
Very cute children's tale, Joyce. I enjoyed reading it! Congratulations on your win for this one! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/5/2014 3:34:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your win Joyce:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:28:00 PM
awww, this is just beautiful, Joyce. Have a great week, my friend xx
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Date: 11/23/2014 3:52:00 AM
Oh Joyce this is so beautifully penned from a different perspective! Perfect work!
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Date: 11/22/2014 1:13:00 PM
what a cute poem with great description - good luck for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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