A Mouse Family's Christmas

It's Christmas Eve and through the house 
there creeps a curious little mouse.
He climbs into the big arm chair 
and finds the cookies waiting there .
He only takes the smallest bite.
Santa will find his treat tonight.

He gazes with wonder at the tree
and the bright wrapped gifts left there to be
a mystery tale to tell his spouse,
when he gets home, this curious mouse.
What an adventure it has been,
he has drunk of some spilled gin
that had been left upon the table.
His wife will think it is a fable
he has concocted to amuse  her.
She is homebound, we must excuse her.

He once came home all out of breath
to say he had been scared to death
by a huge rat with fluffy tail.
She noticed he was very pale.
"While I was nibbling off some cheese
to bring to you, my love, to please,
he almost had me in his paws.
I'm sure he wasn't Santa Claus".
But this night is so very quiet.
He spies some fruitcake, has to try it.
It reminds him of that sip of gin
and wonders if his head will spin.
He hears a noise, runs for his life,
carrying fruitcake for his wife.

Christmas morning, spread before their eyes
for the baby mice, a grand surprise.
Their mama had fixed a Christmas feast
from food their dad had saved from beast.
A bit of butter, a glob of jam
and a fairly good-sized piece of ham.
Bread crumbs saved from other forays.
They had enough to eat for days.
Those little mice would never waste it.
If they didn't like it, they'd still taste it.
This food their mama set before them,
their dad risked his life to get it for them.

11/22/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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September 29, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Joyce, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest Blog "Beautiful, But Fragile" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Hamilton Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 5:07 AM
Joyce a most appealing story for children congrats on win hugs
Kayode Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 10:31 PM
Mouse amusement,a very brilliant one Joyce; congrats on the win...huggs
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December 6, 2014 at 8:53 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful Christmas story with a great lesson Joyce.
Jerden Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 1:54 PM
Very cute, Joyce! Congratulations!
Yvonne Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 11:05 AM
I'm with Debbie a 7 and a fav. Congratulations on your first place win!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 7:57 AM
This was fun, congrats!
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 7:15 AM
Nice allegorical story, congrats on the win
Guzzi Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 9:17 PM
wonderful original tale!! a 7 & a fav Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
May Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 5:25 PM
A lovely story Joyce...congrats on your win
Haight Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 4:03 PM
Very cute children's tale, Joyce. I enjoyed reading it! Congratulations on your win for this one! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 3:34 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your win Joyce:-) hugs Jan xxx
Horne Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 3:28 PM
awww, this is just beautiful, Joyce. Have a great week, my friend xx
A. Sharma Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 3:52 AM
Oh Joyce this is so beautifully penned from a different perspective! Perfect work!
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 1:13 PM
what a cute poem with great description - good luck for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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