A Mountain Speaks

I stood atop a mountain high
Surveyed the vastness of the sky
With arms extended outwardly
A moments thought inspirit me.
I pray you mount, I beg bespeak
Please share with me your grand mystique;
Bestow on me the things you know.
An echo thrice said, “No!.. No!.. No!”
Why? I asked, disconcertingly
Meaning is all I seek, only
Please, please impart what I should know.
Again the echo,” No!.. No!.. No!”
Instantly it began to rain
‘Twas then my quest was all in vain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/1/2009 4:58:00 PM
Refreshed after an extra hour of sleep I feel pretty good today. So I am going to be reading some exceptional poems today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Albert. Enjoyed this read. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2009 2:55:00 PM
very nice flow, it reminds me of a saying 'for those with eyes to see and ears to hear' unfortunatley i have neither. peace and love fellow human
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Date: 11/1/2009 3:25:00 AM
Admirable poem.I love the flow of this. Sincerely,Eric
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Date: 11/1/2009 3:07:00 AM
Mountains have been here forever so they should know. It's a pity that they can't speak. Keep writing. Sara
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