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A Mountain of a Man

He crawled methodically up the stairs A man of six foot four To what would become his death bed As he did each night as before He insisted at being at dinner With the family while he still could His family no longer argued the point Of what he shouldn't or should I only happened to be there at this moment to see it all To see this man's physical reduction To that of a toddlers crawl He had mastered a plan from Point A to B resting part way on elbow and knee I quietly stood he never saw me Somehow that's how I felt it should be He had struggled to keep manly pride intact Deciding for self what he did or not lack He made his way on his own

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Date: 2/21/2023 6:44:00 AM
Strong will, strong man. An uplifting write Vickey. Blessings to you for sharing. :)
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Date: 1/31/2023 10:59:00 AM
Oh Gershon I had no idea of your struggle as you sprinkle humor here and there amid other words profound.I watched a program about pain last week and that the station house for it is the brain.Phantom limb pain is proof of this.The quote they included was of ancient origen.The pain I feel a dart to the body how I feel about it the second dart.You appear to bear it well.You are officially included by name in this old girls prayers.
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Date: 1/30/2023 8:24:00 PM
Chilling for me, Vickey, as I am going through much of the same... Down from 6' 2" at age 45 to 5' 9" now; and pain so bad I walk down stairs backward and struggle mightily up the stairs. It won't be long, I imagine...
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Date: 1/8/2023 4:13:00 PM
The strength is with the writer here, Vickey, amazing poem. To my favourites. Harry.
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 1/9/2023 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Harry.
Date: 1/7/2023 10:23:00 AM
Strong man. Thanks for sharing
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 1/7/2023 10:38:00 AM
Thank you as well.
Date: 1/7/2023 2:39:00 AM
Death had no fear for this tall man. I admire him for it and for you to write such a poem.
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 1/7/2023 5:31:00 AM
Thanks for reading Victor.My experience in happening on this scene was many faceted but the Predominate one was that of an inner applause for one who would navigate his way till he absolutely could not.

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