A Mother's Years of Grief

A MOTHER'S YEARS OF GRIEF

I could never forget the profound sadness, sorrow, pain
when I left my three year old son and two year old daughter
to come here to America for better opportunity for my family.

They were innocently looking at me, not knowing what was
going on, how their lives would change without a mother.
With breaking heart, I hugged and kissed them goodbye.

Months before I left, I was already grieving and anguished
not knowing how long this separation would be; consumed
with guilt thinking how would they be being away from me.

How I longed and missed them, much so when I imagined their
smiling faces and laughter during our years of separation, years
of grief with all the emotional and mental pain that goes with it.  


4/23/21      Grief in 12 Lines or Less Poetry
                  Line Gauthier

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Kauffman Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 10:16 AM
Within the framework of a story, you have so eloquently expressed the grief of all mothers when separated from their children under many circumstances. So well done, Marilene. Perfect for mother's. Congratulations. Blessings to you!
Evans Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 11:47 AM
Oh... your compliments touched my soul. Thank you so much Sam. That was a long time in my life that I dreaded. How I wished they were with me....
Edmonds  Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 2:30 AM
A sad, moving heartfelt write Marilene, one can understand the anguish of families being torn apart. Congratulations on your well deserved win... Belle
Evans Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 6:14 AM
Thanks, Belle. Have a great day.
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 4:40 PM
A lovely write on the topic grief. Very well done, Marilene.
Evans Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 11:12 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea. I appreciate it. Have a great Sunday.
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