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A mother's treasures

A solitary piece the diamond precious rare gem most treasured by those lucky enough to hold Once in possession it is rarely out of grasp Like the gemstone the mother requires very specific conditions in holding fast her (family/) childrens love Treasured forever in her heart she will go out of her way to preen and protect them holding them dear to her deep within her maternal safe – the heart closely guarded by the mind Her infatuation of all treasures to her are totally understandable especially when you think to the complexity of structure and process taken in creation Just as from the ‘unbreakable’ in ancient greek this allotrope of carbon with strength of bonding between atoms is representative of that strong love between mum and child The maternal being could be compared to the superlative physical qualities of the stone Even the characteristic luster of this gem so prevalent from its ability to disperse light and colour compared to the many strengths roles and qualities of the mother seen by the many she deals with daily A most high pressured job versus the high pressured temperature within the Earths mantle that forms the delightful rock it gives birth to Infants delight and ignite the forbearer just as the jewel would dazzle the room a mother’s love encaptures the magical luster of those she’s birthed and nothing stands inbetween this richest of cargo’s

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Date: 9/27/2013 8:03:00 PM
Hi Anna, long time no see... CONGRATULATIONS... in ANTHONY'S "Treasure Chest" contest.. enjoying your awesome win. ***LINDA
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 11/17/2013 5:50:00 AM
Thankyou Linda, appreciate your coming by to read and comment!
Date: 9/25/2013 5:58:00 PM
This is amazing. congrats on your win.
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 9/26/2013 11:36:00 AM
Thanks for coming by to comment Kiran, every thought and read appreciated.
Date: 9/24/2013 7:36:00 PM
I really loved the metaphors within this fine piece of poetry. A very beautifully written poem, Anna-Marie. This definitely deserved the top spot in the contest! Congratulations on your win, as well! Wonderful work!...Thank you for the kind comments. I really appreciate it!
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 9/26/2013 11:32:00 AM
Thankyou Kelly, nice to see you enjoyed your visit, hope to see you again soon... Appreciated.
Date: 9/24/2013 4:54:00 PM
I remember this one and see that it won. WAY to GO
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 9/26/2013 11:21:00 AM
Thankyou so much Andrea, it's the constant support and encouragement of people like yourself that keep me writing. Appreciated. Hugs x
Date: 9/24/2013 1:19:00 PM
Motherhood is a treasure to us all. Wonderful expression of all it's glory and complexity. Congrats on no. 1. Peace. :)
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 9/26/2013 11:19:00 AM
Thankyou so much for stopping by to leave your kind thoughts.
Date: 9/24/2013 3:50:00 AM
Anne Maire great poem congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 9/24/2013 10:02:00 AM
Thankyou very much, good to see you.
Date: 9/24/2013 12:44:00 AM
Congratulations! A well deserving win and a poem to be felt...Bidhu
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 9/24/2013 3:05:00 AM
Thankyou for your visit, your thoughts most welcomed!
Date: 9/23/2013 10:25:00 PM
a beautiful loving poem Anna. love ~SKAT~
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 9/24/2013 3:02:00 AM
Good to see you again, thanks for coming by to read and comment, your thoughts much appreciated!
Date: 9/23/2013 8:55:00 PM
Well deserved....much congratulations
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 9/24/2013 2:57:00 AM
Thankyou kindly, so pleased you came by!
Date: 9/23/2013 8:40:00 AM
what a beautiful poem you have inked...congrats on your well deserved win :)
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 9/24/2013 2:44:00 AM
Thankyou, delighted you found this, and appreciate your coming by!
Date: 8/17/2013 3:24:00 PM
Ps., I Wished To Return Unto This Brilliant As Beautiful Painting, And Place It's Loveliness Which I Thought To Do Yesterday After I Had Left For The Evening Into My Favourites ˜ Have A Very Wonderful Day Over There, Within Her Beauty's UK ˜ Love, John
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Date: 8/17/2013 7:13:00 AM
- This is truly a gem, Anna-Marie !!!! - Have a great weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2013 5:39:00 PM
....'Beautiful In Exquisite As Brilliant And Yes Her Beauty And Love Faithful Are To Be Praised, This Creation * Love, John
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Date: 8/16/2013 5:36:00 PM
† Except 'God The Father & Creator Of All!' Lest We Forget And Then Must Face The Eternal King ? HE, Whom Opens As Closes A Mother's Womb. Brings Forth Kings Queens And Kingdoms, For HIS Purpose ? As Also Lowers They Unto The Dust From Whence They Rose. Where Shall Glory Be, Without HIS Blessing ? Yet, Who Can Resist HIS Will ? Ahhh, Let Us Nay Forget, Our Very Reason. For There Are No 'Treasures,' Lest They Fall From HIS Hands * I Believe Precious Priceless Beautiful Loving Mother Would Agree..
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Date: 8/16/2013 10:27:00 AM
Hey, this kind of matches with my etheree digging for gold. Gems of love are the most valued., the message of this one for sure. How good to see you posting a new poem today!
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