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Poetic Form: Monorhyme

Inspired: 2023 November 18

 

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Bite Size Poem no77
Contest Judged: 2023 November 29
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

 

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A Mother's Thanksgiving

Mother's mornings, we're getting up, she's thankful for waking, mother's days, we're at school, she's singing while she's cleaning, mother's noons, we're eating lunch, she's with dear friends, inviting, mother's eves, before our dinner with our hands held, she's praying, mother's nights, by our bedsides, she's saying "I love you" kissing, mother's in heaven, softly saying I'm here my darlings, watching.
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Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 1:33 PM
so very sweet, William!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 1:46 PM
She'll reservedly agree with you, Andrea. Aloha, William
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