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A Mother's Love

You turn your back and roll your eyes I fix your collar and try to make you smile I have so much love inside never ending like the heights of the sky bright like the stars that used to shine in your eyes everyone wants for their own fading into the darkness until they're back where they belong I just want to cry I find a way to go on find a way to be strong find a way to bring life in my heart when half of it is gone you forget where you came from you're so far from home what happens if evil finds you? he'll come as a sheep a wolf is inside him he'll come as your friend then slither behind you my instincts kick in will they save you or drown you? Im not sure of much now but one thing is certain a mother's love runs deeper than the ocean

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/20/2024 8:51:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/3/2011 2:53:00 AM
Hi, nice poem, and please just a few kind comments - there are a few spelling errors you might want to correct, ie- hights (4th line) should be heights and until has one "l" (8th line). Only saying this as you could enter this in a contest, but errors in spelling can make you lose it. Just do a quick spell check before posting. ;) Lee
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Christine Malliaros
Date: 9/3/2011 2:56:00 AM
thanks so much :)

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