A Mother's Envy and Pride

Lapis lazuli mines with wide blue eyes
bringing to mind precious stones and
caramel scones; innocent and wise -
Wondering, yet without surprise.

Staring down the universe, a challenge
in your look though you are young;
The earth made only nine revolutions 
since you came out to see the sun.

Unguarded and arched, your brows 
betray high wire tension; enough 
to light up a hundred moons and warm
plump cheeks to cherry bubble gum.

Be not impatient to grow; you smell
of open grasshopper meadows
and firefly lighted lakeshore walks.
You’re a mother’s envy and pride.

Red lips! Your passion for life exists.
Scarlet, lipstick would be a surfeit -
Today as then till many summer’s been,
your spirit will always be free as the mist.



After:  Portrait of Carol Nye  Rhoades (Robinson) (1915)


For Debbie Guzzi's Challenge: Ten Pictures, Ten Poems, Ten Days - Painting No. 2
Kim Patrice Nunez
08 January 2016

Poem of the Week:  January 10-16, 2016
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Simpson Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 11:49 PM
Now i feel like writing an ode to my child.....well done Kim
Lindley Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:34 PM
Congrats on POTW my friend. Just now saw this , I've been largely missing reading as of late. Simply wonderful poem! A7
Makama Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Beautiful and well expressed lines in their finest. A great and well deserved 7
Barchettadrive Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Great piece! So fun to read!
Williams Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 10:09 AM
I envy you. Your great commentary. Congrats POTW
Turner Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 7:30 AM
First line's a killer. well written and easy to read.
Fleming Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 6:34 AM
This is all very nice, Kim! Five compact little verses crammed full of beautiful lines throughout - Delightful! My very best regards, Kim! :) john P.s A Seven.
Makama Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Classic, intelligent, sublime and graceful. As usual, yet another excellent piece from you dear poet. Happy new year once again
Y. Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Kim, I'm glad that this well written piece was chosen as poem of the week.Congratulations! -Alexis
Daniel Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 7:29 AM
Well chosen words- "staring down the universe", "your brows betray high wire tension", "Be not impatient to grow"... An excellent write..
Allison Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 5:44 PM
Absolutely stunning Kim I am in awe of your creativity with this challenge - wow wow wow you have come back with your pen on fire - go girl!!!!!!!!!! congrats on POTW hugs Jan xxx
Drag Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 5:38 PM
Lovely and visually rich!
Muideen Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 2:26 PM
This is really awesome KIM, thanks for sharing and for the inspiration...Congratulations...... Love always..........A.M.
Woods    Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 11:13 AM
Well done on POTW!
May Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 7:04 AM
Well written Kim, best wishes
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 9:59 PM
also, love the ending of this!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 9:58 PM
stanzas three and four. I love them!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 9:57 PM
hey, did you not have sisters?? they are so wonderful, and I also have a half sister who was not born when that picture was taken. Let me see this poem now.
Gasun Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 8:21 PM
An excellent portray of words from this beautiful canvas my very dear friend, Kim! Truly a great artist you are! Many hugs! love lots, Leonora
Crisci Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Hi, Kim. I am reading your poem of the second portrait and you soften my heart and spirit. Best wishes in the contest. Here's how I wrote it: I felt the movement of waves as notes, then the bright colors gave me another hit. The blue and green colors suggested a calm sea, then a wrote the first stanza writing about the scenery, the second about the instruments and finally the last about me being a listener. Words of a poem come to me naturally by observation and contemplation.
Pinet Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 5:17 PM
The author used superb imagery and gentle words to bring her feelings to the page and into our hearts. Emile.
Callus Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 4:38 PM
Top marks to you, Kim! You amaze me with your creativity...you communicate well with this painting, and you did the same with the previous one. The rest did you good, and now you have come back with guns blazing:) Hugs // paul
Laurie Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Hello Kim... lovely to see you back and reading your unique verse. Your words are truly a painting - thank you Kim - Lindsay
Sage Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 11:28 AM
excellent write Kim, the words described the portrait well
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January 8, 2016 at 10:46 AM
A portrait repainted with words of hues of splendor! Excellent dear Kim! A seven!
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