A Mother's Envy and Pride

Lapis lazuli mines with wide blue eyes
bringing to mind precious stones and
caramel scones; innocent and wise -
Wondering, yet without surprise.

Staring down the universe, a challenge
in your look though you are young;
The earth made only nine revolutions 
since you came out to see the sun.

Unguarded and arched, your brows 
betray high wire tension; enough 
to light up a hundred moons and warm
plump cheeks to cherry bubble gum.

Be not impatient to grow; you smell
of open grasshopper meadows
and firefly lighted lakeshore walks.
You’re a mother’s envy and pride.

Red lips! Your passion for life exists.
Scarlet, lipstick would be a surfeit -
Today as then till many summer’s been,
your spirit will always be free as the mist.



After:  Portrait of Carol Nye  Rhoades (Robinson) (1915)


For Debbie Guzzi's Challenge: Ten Pictures, Ten Poems, Ten Days - Painting No. 2
Kim Patrice Nunez
08 January 2016

Poem of the Week:  January 10-16, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 2/26/2016 11:49:00 PM
Now i feel like writing an ode to my child.....well done Kim
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Date: 1/31/2016 8:34:00 PM
Congrats on POTW my friend. Just now saw this , I've been largely missing reading as of late. Simply wonderful poem! A7
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Date: 1/19/2016 8:41:00 AM
Beautiful and well expressed lines in their finest. A great and well deserved 7
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Date: 1/16/2016 10:13:00 AM
Great piece! So fun to read!
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Date: 1/15/2016 10:09:00 AM
I envy you. Your great commentary. Congrats POTW
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Date: 1/14/2016 7:30:00 AM
First line's a killer. well written and easy to read.
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Date: 1/13/2016 6:34:00 AM
This is all very nice, Kim! Five compact little verses crammed full of beautiful lines throughout - Delightful! My very best regards, Kim! :) john P.s A Seven.
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:48:00 AM
Classic, intelligent, sublime and graceful. As usual, yet another excellent piece from you dear poet. Happy new year once again
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Date: 1/11/2016 12:13:00 PM
Kim, I'm glad that this well written piece was chosen as poem of the week.Congratulations! -Alexis
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Date: 1/11/2016 7:29:00 AM
Well chosen words- "staring down the universe", "your brows betray high wire tension", "Be not impatient to grow"... An excellent write..
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Date: 1/10/2016 5:44:00 PM
Absolutely stunning Kim I am in awe of your creativity with this challenge - wow wow wow you have come back with your pen on fire - go girl!!!!!!!!!! congrats on POTW hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/10/2016 5:38:00 PM
Lovely and visually rich!
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Date: 1/10/2016 2:26:00 PM
This is really awesome KIM, thanks for sharing and for the inspiration...Congratulations...... Love always..........A.M.
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Date: 1/10/2016 11:13:00 AM
Well done on POTW!
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Date: 1/9/2016 7:04:00 AM
Well written Kim, best wishes
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Date: 1/8/2016 9:59:00 PM
also, love the ending of this!!
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Date: 1/8/2016 9:58:00 PM
stanzas three and four. I love them!!
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Date: 1/8/2016 9:57:00 PM
hey, did you not have sisters?? they are so wonderful, and I also have a half sister who was not born when that picture was taken. Let me see this poem now.
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Date: 1/8/2016 8:21:00 PM
An excellent portray of words from this beautiful canvas my very dear friend, Kim! Truly a great artist you are! Many hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 1/8/2016 6:12:00 PM
Hi, Kim. I am reading your poem of the second portrait and you soften my heart and spirit. Best wishes in the contest. Here's how I wrote it: I felt the movement of waves as notes, then the bright colors gave me another hit. The blue and green colors suggested a calm sea, then a wrote the first stanza writing about the scenery, the second about the instruments and finally the last about me being a listener. Words of a poem come to me naturally by observation and contemplation.
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Date: 1/8/2016 5:17:00 PM
The author used superb imagery and gentle words to bring her feelings to the page and into our hearts. Emile.
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Date: 1/8/2016 4:38:00 PM
Top marks to you, Kim! You amaze me with your creativity...you communicate well with this painting, and you did the same with the previous one. The rest did you good, and now you have come back with guns blazing:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/8/2016 4:29:00 PM
Hello Kim... lovely to see you back and reading your unique verse. Your words are truly a painting - thank you Kim - Lindsay
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Date: 1/8/2016 11:28:00 AM
excellent write Kim, the words described the portrait well
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Date: 1/8/2016 10:46:00 AM
A portrait repainted with words of hues of splendor! Excellent dear Kim! A seven!
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