A Mother's Ears

I have her face, so I've been told, and traces of her eyes of blue  
The glimpse of gold within her soul,  I can only pray to hold

As eyes go,...she had two pair, the ones in front, the pair in back
Both pair could spy a lie, intact.  And pacts we made with devilment

Her ears could hear a baby's cry, before the baby made a sound
Her ears could hear a squabble brew, before the fight had taken ground
Her ears could hear a friend in need, a heart in pain, the sound of rain,
before a cloud would dare appear

She heard the whimper in the night, of silent weeping, swallowed tears,
or discomfort from a fevered brow....  She heard it all, without a doubt

She could hear our schemes.....the good.......the bad.......the in-between
It came endowed, so naturally, a passage rite of motherhood

I marveled at this miracle, with awe and envy in my mind...
Not knowing then, what I know now.   It was born in me, as well, somehow...

This something so designed by God, that I too, hear the silent things...
      The cookie jar, in muted mode,  ...The million codes, of teenage love
      And through the years my ears are tuned, to hear the varied undertones

One night it was,..., my daughter, grown, would call me on the telephone

One word, it was,       that's all it was .........  
her voice was odd...the silence long

"Mom" is all she said to me

 ....I knew,   .... I knew,   I know the sound, 
when something's terribly wrong.


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5/4/15
For Contest Sponsored By Craig Cornish:"A Mother's Ears"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/29/2015 6:59:00 AM
You penned a very lovely and excellent poem for one of the most important persons in our life my dear friend, Carrie. Thank you so much for sharing and my warmest Congratulations on your great win! Big hugs and cheers! thanks a lot as well for your lovely words on mine! More blessings! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 5/22/2015 1:02:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. Awesome entry for Craig's "A Mother's Ears" contest. Have a great day. LINDA
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Date: 5/19/2015 9:21:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. SKAT
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Date: 5/18/2015 4:04:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/13/2015 2:53:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading what you so passionately wrote. Being a Mother has its challenges how ever most of all its a blessing. You reminded of that and I thank you . Congrats on all the recognition you have gotten on poetry soup. Carrie when you have a chance stop by and check out some my poems. - Alexis
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:43:00 AM
So brilliantly true Carrie. I can read between the lines here and certainly within them - you are a beautiful mother.
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Date: 5/5/2015 2:21:00 PM
I can always know when something is wrong with my son - not what he says but how he says it - I agree mothers do have a 6th sense:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/5/2015 1:35:00 PM
I love this Carrie....Mom's are something special and have that sixth sense. Tim
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