A Mother's Advice

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A mother's advice When you get up make your bed straighten your bedroom if someone comes in it will be clean and straight Old age advices Just get up Provided you're able Or Sleep in the recliner A mother's advice Make a full breakfast Homemade biscuits Bacon, eggs To be well fed Old age advises. Simple will do Go out or A sandwich or two

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Joe Maverick

Date: 12/21/2023 3:19:00 PM

Simple yet strong advice we can't do Everyting Sara, its better to do things In a managable ammount, Thats winning'

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/22/2023 1:45:00 AM

Why, thank you, Joe. I appreciate the visit and nice comment. Sara K

Bill Baker

Date: 12/20/2023 2:27:00 PM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, Sara. I like your new ways of doing things, my friend. Hugs, Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/21/2023 2:14:00 AM

Makes life easier, doesn't it? I find a bowl of fruit on the table and some fresh shelled nuts at hand fills in the gap for good nutrition or some cheese and crackers. Thanks for the visits to my pages. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/20/2023 7:37:00 AM

This is such a beautiful and heartwarming poem dear Sara. It has a wonderful nostalgic touch and instantly reminded me of the advices that my mum gives me.. She is honestly my bestest friend in life and I've the strongest bond with her. So reading this actually made me reminisce about all the sayings of my mum.. Truly, a pleasure reading this. Sending you love & light :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/20/2023 10:45:00 AM

Life is comprised of so many memories and the good ones are the best. Good that you have those good memories of your mom that someday will sustain you. Thanks for the uplifting visit. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 12/20/2023 6:49:00 AM

Ah this is so true and so well written dear sara, i loved it, especially the opening lines remind me of my mom when i was little, Nostalgic. And the last lines remind me of me to my son. You have woven a very profound write. That many will resonate with. Motherhood, theres no limit for it, we will always think of children before anything else, pleasure reading you, sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/20/2023 10:43:00 AM

Why, thank you. Your visits always are encouraging. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/20/2023 3:46:00 AM

You covered them all Sara, and good advice too. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/20/2023 4:30:00 AM

Thank you, Tom. I appreciate your thoughtfulness. Sara K