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A Moonlit Night

It was a brisk and clear moonlit night The moon was out, full and shining bright Raptor sounds echoed of shrills and shrieks As the river danced with tiny white peaks Barren Trees glistened with frosty limbs Nighttime sounds sing soothing hymns Nocturnal creatures now actively awake Busy searching for food scraps to take A deer appears along the riverbank to drink Cautiously touching the water not to sink An owl swoops down with expanded wings and hoots and coos as his hunting begins Feasting river rats quickly scurry to hide As the owl continues to swoop and glide A fish catch in his talons as he flies to his nest A feast for his family before he can rest

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Date: 11/24/2022 10:03:00 PM
Beautiful scenes and sights make this night a heavenly night ! I like the image of the owl springing up with a fish dangling from his talons ! Congratulations Tania on your great win.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/25/2022 4:20:00 AM
Valsa, thank you!
Date: 11/19/2022 4:09:00 AM
Nice Imagery and well written, Tania. Best wishes in the contest dear friend :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/19/2022 4:46:00 AM
Charlie, thank you!
Date: 11/18/2022 1:37:00 PM
- A beautiful sight at night... wish I was there, Tania :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/18/2022 3:48:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you!
Date: 11/18/2022 5:47:00 AM
A lovely description of moonlit night. BIG congrats on your TOP win, Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/18/2022 1:00:00 PM
Vijay, thank you!
Date: 11/17/2022 8:08:00 PM
"Raptor sounds echoed of shrills and shrieks As the river danced with tiny white peaks" - The entire poem is very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/18/2022 3:16:00 AM
Chris, thank you!
Date: 11/17/2022 5:10:00 PM
This winning piece has excellent lines, Tania. Congratulations on winning first place in my contest.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/17/2022 6:23:00 PM
Lasaad, thank you and thank you for my placement!
Date: 11/17/2022 6:53:00 AM
nothing quite so beautiful as barren trees with frosty limbs, I love that imagery Tania, it's my favourite part of winter :) lovely poem, good luck to you in the contest
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/17/2022 1:23:00 PM
Hat, thank you!
Date: 11/16/2022 7:15:00 AM
If anyone wants to learn how to utilize imagery, read this poem or better still put it in a frame. Sublime poetry.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/16/2022 2:23:00 PM
Victor, thank you very much! hugs
Date: 11/16/2022 6:33:00 AM
Tania, your lines are wonderfully enhanced to illuminate the beauty of the night.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/16/2022 7:13:00 AM
Jenna, thank you!

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