A Moonlit Night

It was a brisk and clear moonlit night
The moon was out, full and shining bright
Raptor sounds echoed of shrills and shrieks
As the river danced with tiny white peaks

Barren Trees glistened with frosty limbs
Nighttime sounds sing soothing hymns 
Nocturnal creatures now actively awake
Busy searching for food scraps to take

A deer appears along the riverbank to drink
Cautiously touching the water not to sink
An owl swoops down with expanded wings
and hoots and coos as his hunting begins 

Feasting river rats quickly scurry to hide
As the owl continues to swoop and glide
A fish catch in his talons as he flies to his nest
A feast for his family before he can rest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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George Avatar
November 24, 2022 at 10:03 PM
Beautiful scenes and sights make this night a heavenly night ! I like the image of the owl springing up with a fish dangling from his talons ! Congratulations Tania on your great win.
Kitchin Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 4:20 AM
Valsa, thank you!
Messina Avatar
November 19, 2022 at 4:09 AM
Nice Imagery and well written, Tania. Best wishes in the contest dear friend :)
Kitchin Avatar
November 19, 2022 at 4:46 AM
Charlie, thank you!
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 1:37 PM
- A beautiful sight at night... wish I was there, Tania :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 3:48 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you!
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 5:47 AM
A lovely description of moonlit night. BIG congrats on your TOP win, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 1:00 PM
Vijay, thank you!
Alex Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 8:08 PM
"Raptor sounds echoed of shrills and shrieks As the river danced with tiny white peaks" - The entire poem is very beautiful. Congratulations!
Kitchin Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 3:16 AM
Chris, thank you!
Poet Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 5:10 PM
This winning piece has excellent lines, Tania. Congratulations on winning first place in my contest.
Kitchin Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 6:23 PM
Lasaad, thank you and thank you for my placement!
Bueckert Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 6:53 AM
nothing quite so beautiful as barren trees with frosty limbs, I love that imagery Tania, it's my favourite part of winter :) lovely poem, good luck to you in the contest
Kitchin Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 1:23 PM
Hat, thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 7:15 AM
If anyone wants to learn how to utilize imagery, read this poem or better still put it in a frame. Sublime poetry.
Kitchin Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Victor, thank you very much! hugs
Logan Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 6:33 AM
Tania, your lines are wonderfully enhanced to illuminate the beauty of the night.
Kitchin Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Jenna, thank you!
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