A Moon in Love

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In the middle of the night, when the butterflies dance to the moon's song Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon 11/18/2023

Smiles of a bright moon in the middle of the night, one butterfly is in tune fluttering into her shiny light. An admiring moon watches to an unique performance, the butterfly shows her dances, they both are in a conformance. They met together one night, they were happy for a second, It was love at first sight, nothing to be questioned. Up there she smiles happily, she won't be resigned, she wants to live her fantasy. A second to be remembered is worth years to be unhappy.

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/17/2023 8:40:00 PM

A beautiful butterfly poem, Maria. I like the photo you chose to introduce the subject of your poem. Love can be quite the mystery, especially love at first flight ... I mean sight. Smiles ~ Blessings my friend. Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/18/2023 12:43:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend. Have a lovely poetic weekendxxx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/17/2023 4:47:00 PM

Maria -- this is a touching and soft poetically written story. You have a unique voice that subtly draws the reader into your words. Such is the case here. You've captured love at first sight which can seem like a fantasy but perhaps it's real. Always hard to know, isn't it? The two butterflies seem to be in sync...so perhaps the love, the attraction is real...I digress. This is a fine poem. Thanks for sharing your beautiful poetic voice and spirit, hugs, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/18/2023 12:42:00 AM

Good morning Sara. Thank you very much for your beautiful words too. Blessingsxxxx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/17/2023 3:38:00 PM

Hello maria, if she goes into marriage to fast she will be very unhappy. it takes time to know a person of butterfly. Anyway i enjy your poem. Hugs. Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/18/2023 11:20:00 AM

Hello Maria, yes no matter how far ones lives it is still love. Have a nice day Maria. Enjoy your weekend. Hugs. xxx/Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/17/2023 4:00:00 PM

I don' t know Darlene, this is the story about somebody far away. Love in the distance. I mean if you really love somebody, it doesn't matter how far he or she is...love is always love. My dear Darlene, have a nice weekendxxxx