A monk with no god

The monk looked down at his tattered sandals.
He wondered if he could climb the high woody hill.
He shrugged and began the arduous climb.

From up high he surveyed the landscape,
And the sea beyond.  Above was the vast sky.
No clouds to hamper his upward vision.
The universe was eternally infinite.

Who created it?  God? The big bang?   Who knows?
There should be a reality as to its creation.
God’s power would have been complex:
Both immanent and beyond it, transcendent.
What proof had he?  Creation could be anything.

He got up and began his descendant.
His mind a fog of truism and fallacies.
After all, he was a monk with no god.
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Legros Kelley Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 5:31 PM
From the very title of you poem I was hooked. It is so hard to realize that there are those in practice of religious standing that may actually be bereft of faith.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 4:06 AM
There are false believers who though they see, see nothing at all. How cool is it that we can see beyond the sky. Early people could not. We can be privy to so much and see nothing at all. Great write to ponder.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 9:34 AM
WOW!!! What a powerful write you have here. You are making us think and that is a good thing. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away..............
Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 1:13 AM
Nice ponderings.... All the best for the contest.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 6:11 PM
the spiritual depth of your poem resonanted with me...thought provoking and memorable words.
Rolland Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 8:31 AM
i think proofs are everywhere, the monk is a wonderful human being who must know some truths to share, thanks for the moving poem
Rodgers Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 7:19 AM
Hello Victor, I really appreciate the depth and quiet questioning in. Such a powerful meditation that uses a simple climb up a hill to explore some of the biggest questions there are. Amen! Autumn Blessings Victor, Daniel
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