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A Monchielle Of Love

Oh Monchielle of Love thou fittest me like glove inside His palm, His child, aiming up like a dove of love, truthful and wild. Oh Monchielle of Love unnotched from up above ye knowest when to heal, without the earthly shove of sheltered, human creel. Oh Monchielle of Love your written word thereof tells me I am worthy Thou shalt be my ringdove in my lonesome journey Oh Monchielle of Love receptacle of love pannikin of my soul thou fittest me like glove cored inside, heaven's cove.

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Date: 2/16/2024 7:04:00 PM
In praise of the style this speaks much.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/17/2024 1:07:00 PM
Thank you for reading and taking time to comment S, :)
Date: 2/16/2024 3:41:00 PM
A creative and unique poem. So well written and with a lovely flow. have a great weekend my friend.
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Date: 2/16/2024 6:02:00 PM
You too dear Jerry, blessings
Date: 2/16/2024 3:37:00 PM
exquisite, dear Rose! Beautifully crafted, soft, and flowing lines made this poem a delight to read...I feel your love for God in your words...he fittest you like glove cored inside, heaven's cove. Beautiful ending lines. A sheer delight to read. Have a blessed evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 2/16/2024 6:02:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the poem Sara, hope all is well sweet thoughts :)
Date: 2/16/2024 1:01:00 PM
Such a beautiful Monchielle dear Rose. It is so well written, flows so well and very uplifting. I love the imagery and the spirituality radiant throughout its well crafted lines. ‘ Cored inside heaven’s cove’ - what a gorgeous line. It shines out from the page to the reader. A real pleasure reading this. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and blessings xx
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/16/2024 2:36:00 PM
Core of heaven is where we all desire to be dearest Christina. I appreciate your comment and your isit here, stay well, heart blessings, sent to you :)
Date: 2/16/2024 9:21:00 AM
Dear Mystic Rose, The imagery of being held within the palm of His love, like a dove aiming upwards, is both tender and hopeful. It speaks to a yearning for belonging and connection, a desire to be guided and embraced by something greater than ourselves. Your poem is not just beautifully written but deeply moving and spiritually touching. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/16/2024 2:36:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed it Daniel and thank you for taking the time to leave such an extensive comment it is much appreciated . :)

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