Mystic Rose Rose Poet Monchielle Stanza

A Monchielle Of Love

Oh Monchielle of Love
thou fittest me like glove 
inside His palm, His child, 
aiming up like a dove  
of love, truthful and wild. 

Oh Monchielle of Love 
unnotched from up above 
ye knowest when to heal, 
without the earthly shove 
of sheltered, human creel. 

Oh Monchielle of Love  
your written word thereof 
tells me I am worthy 
Thou shalt be my ringdove 
in my lonesome journey 

Oh Monchielle of Love  
receptacle of  love 
pannikin of my soul 
thou fittest me like glove 
cored inside, heaven's cove.

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The Situation February 16, 2024 at 7:04 PM In praise of the style this speaks much. Mystic Rose Rose February 17, 2024 at 1:07 PM Thank you for reading and taking time to comment S, :)

Jerry Brotherton February 16, 2024 at 3:41 PM A creative and unique poem. So well written and with a lovely flow. have a great weekend my friend. Mystic Rose Rose February 16, 2024 at 6:02 PM You too dear Jerry, blessings

Christina Bowring February 16, 2024 at 1:01 PM Such a beautiful Monchielle dear Rose. It is so well written, flows so well and very uplifting. I love the imagery and the spirituality radiant throughout its well crafted lines. ‘ Cored inside heaven’s cove’ - what a gorgeous line. It shines out from the page to the reader. A real pleasure reading this. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and blessings xx Mystic Rose Rose February 16, 2024 at 2:36 PM Core of heaven is where we all desire to be dearest Christina. I appreciate your comment and your isit here, stay well, heart blessings, sent to you :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 16, 2024 at 9:21 AM Dear Mystic Rose, The imagery of being held within the palm of His love, like a dove aiming upwards, is both tender and hopeful. It speaks to a yearning for belonging and connection, a desire to be guided and embraced by something greater than ourselves. Your poem is not just beautifully written but deeply moving and spiritually touching. - Blessings, Daniel Mystic Rose Rose February 16, 2024 at 2:36 PM So glad you enjoyed it Daniel and thank you for taking the time to leave such an extensive comment it is much appreciated . :)