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A Moment On The Heart

Quiet thoughts linger like a moment on the heart feathered nanoseconds arising with the ebb and flow Soft gentle waters flow, over green hills blue skies and a warm sun that shines its silence over me... Russet leaves that tinge the soil with crinkle kisses blooming trees singing their praises, branches open little piano sonatas in the air, heaven is listening to the refrain of life, arias of love and peace... Still rocks that sleep surrounded by foamy waters that never cease, layered hours full of green space Hidden coves of beauty that are created by grace to enhance our lives, together we go.. Barefoot on this loving land that God created we feel the pulse of the earth beneath our feet crevices of loneliness are suddenly filled we are the song of joy, together we remain...

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Date: 2/15/2024 11:26:00 PM
This is a poem! So gorgeously written to conjure up the gentle truth that nature holds. These are the places I want to walk and smell and feel under my feet. Sounds like Eden. Love this Rose x (fav)
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Date: 2/12/2024 1:59:00 PM
such a gentle and soft read, dear Rose. I could feel your love for nature with 'its hidden coves of beauty that are created by grace." Such a wonderful line...I could feel your love for God and your joy. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem...have a splendid evening, Sara
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Date: 2/12/2024 5:57:00 AM
So very beautiful, Vienna: we feel the pulse of the earth beneath our feet crevices of loneliness are suddenly filled we are the song of joy, together we remain...
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Date: 2/12/2024 8:48:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed the faith and the poem too, Vijay, you have an appreciative heart, thank you
Date: 2/12/2024 1:53:00 AM
Heaven is listening to the refrain of life, arias of love and peace. Beautiful extract.
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Date: 2/12/2024 8:47:00 AM
Always love and peace at our side, if we know how to take on God's love, so glad you enjoyed the poem. May the good Lord, bless you always
Date: 2/11/2024 6:23:00 PM
every poem, is a new experience, this one is a moment of grace, thanks Rose
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Date: 2/11/2024 7:39:00 PM
Thank you for reading Yann. Have a blessed evening :)

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