A Moment of Your Time

A Moment of your Time

I was just going through my head notes and re-wrotes....
and came up with a finished writing that will become a re-write piece to say the least....I begged and pleaded with this now completed much needed sheet of paper that let my pen...that I used...
to write a complete poem to compete and show 'em me the "Eh Hem Pete"..... hi....may I....have a moment of your time? to unleash my mind from this surge of words that I purge from my eyes so I won't be going blind no more 
or suffer from the eyes sore that I bare and bore before...it's not fair to endure a nightmare...or stare at the door when I'm awake...looking for...something to adore...but see nothing more....I care...but I swear...I will not compare my writing free to my daydreams and streams of words that I see to other people's poetry 
I am merely just being me...
myself and I...hi...can I have a moment of your time? to unwind these blind binding words that are becoming more and more my vision...it's like I'm in a prisoned prism...locked down pen in hand...writing position...GO!...but woah...where do I start?...how could I part the ink from the pen...
and begin to write a rewrote note....on this sheet of paper? I know...here we GO....creator...Roses are Red...Violets are Blue...never mind...can you give me a moment of your time....? 
can you be so kind...and listen or read and comprehend as i stand here and recite these blinding words that I will rewrite....
that my Pen's ink will bleed to 
write from its statue of nature onto this sheet of Paper from my mind the creator...
Can I have A moment of your Time?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 8/23/2015 12:15:00 AM
Hi Peter, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**
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Peter Despirito
Date: 8/23/2015 12:38:00 AM
Thank you SKAT
Date: 8/12/2015 12:13:00 AM
Peter,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Peter Despirito
Date: 8/12/2015 8:52:00 PM
Thank you so very much for the welcome and I appreciate your friendship as well..
Date: 8/11/2015 3:53:00 AM
- A great poem and moment of my time ! - With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Peter :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)
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Peter Despirito
Date: 8/12/2015 8:53:00 PM
Thank you Anne...this comment coming from you is an exciting read for me to have touched such a wonderful poet...thank you again I look forward to our friendship may it blossom like a wild flower that will never part the world...
Date: 8/9/2015 10:49:00 PM
Peter, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets, like me. SKAT Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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