A Moment of Sadness

Come towards the ocean of my eye
and feel that humid current
Come on, don't be frightened !
You'll see that glacier lake
through which the hot lava flows
Come and see the masts
that were never seen before
upon a world screaming in a soundproof sphere...



written at 13. I just translated it today...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Richards Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 8:04 AM
Wow....amazing thaat you were writing such wonderful poetry at 13! :) ps...soupmail ! :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 2:01 PM
Great metaphoric language used in this one...I read into this one that a thirteen year old girl was suffering from anger and depression..I am correct on that one?..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 10:41 PM
wow that is very intense for a 13 year old child. your talent was shining even then! LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 9:46 PM
Nice expressions on a moment of sadness
Sweetheart Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 8:47 PM
Sad yet sweet Iolanda .. enjoyed the precious lines of your creative write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
A   Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 8:11 PM
sad and strong write, enjoyed the read...P.D.
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