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A Moment of Sadness

Come towards the ocean of my eye and feel that humid current Come on, don't be frightened ! You'll see that glacier lake through which the hot lava flows Come and see the masts that were never seen before upon a world screaming in a soundproof sphere... written at 13. I just translated it today...

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Date: 6/22/2010 8:04:00 AM
Wow....amazing thaat you were writing such wonderful poetry at 13! :) ps...soupmail ! :)
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Date: 6/19/2010 2:01:00 PM
Great metaphoric language used in this one...I read into this one that a thirteen year old girl was suffering from anger and depression..I am correct on that one?..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/18/2010 10:41:00 PM
wow that is very intense for a 13 year old child. your talent was shining even then! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/18/2010 9:46:00 PM
Nice expressions on a moment of sadness
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Date: 6/18/2010 8:47:00 PM
Sad yet sweet Iolanda .. enjoyed the precious lines of your creative write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/18/2010 8:11:00 PM
sad and strong write, enjoyed the read...P.D.
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