A Moment, Luminous

Tumbling, over the timeworn stones I'll fly in a kingdom of the winds Far from here, I am bathed by the moon, washed at midnight by radiant light I will soar, in the clarion dawn, free-falling over the edge of earth While cool mist, washed in splintered sunlight, lets me be a shadow of myself
_______________________________________________ 10/30/14 For Nette's Contest: Crystalline By Carrie Richards
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 9:35 PM
simply gorgeous, CArrie. It got better and better as I read it!!!
Guzzi Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 7:52 PM
A hard form no room for elaboration? Go Carrie! Thanks for the nice comment on "joss sticks" and afternoon in Devi's skin was not pleasant. Light & Love
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 3:54 PM
absolutely stunning imagery Carrie - Nette will love this - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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