A Moment After the Sun

when the shadows are enlarging
benaeth the plane of the old blue sky
and a few stars are out peeping
looking for the moon rise
and the gaze isout touching
reaching for my heart
then, i will remember the kiss once
that did say the good-bye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Agustin Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 4:54 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 9:28 PM
awesome poem. LINDA
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January 8, 2016 at 9:41 PM
ahmed, well done on your poem, enjoyed reading today. *SKAT
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