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A Moment

When hearing future times echo within A moment to pause and see her within The innocence of love inside their eyes And he touches her skin to feel within Her belly tight with the tension of new life As ultrasound echoes the proof within The words of love have now led us to this For life now grows and we feel it within © JG Farmer 2017

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Date: 5/26/2017 8:21:00 PM
Dear Jez, your poem is beautiful, but it is not ghazal (the word within is refrain, the repeating part) your ghazal is missing "the rhyme"you have to make a rhyme with the word echo on the first line. Check the site there is a good explanation about ghazal.
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