Jez Farmer Poet Ghazal

A Moment

When hearing future times echo within
A moment to pause and see her within

The innocence of love inside their eyes
And he touches her skin to feel within

Her belly tight with the tension of new life
As ultrasound echoes the proof within

The words of love have now led us to this
For life now grows and we feel it within


© JG Farmer 2017

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Pashang Salehi May 26, 2017 at 8:21 PM Dear Jez, your poem is beautiful, but it is not ghazal (the word within is refrain, the repeating part) your ghazal is missing "the rhyme"you have to make a rhyme with the word echo on the first line. Check the site there is a good explanation about ghazal.