A Moment

Serenely the breeze blows past
Gently she inhales to consume it all
Stirred by sounds so isolate
She strains to hear the wind call
Gathering her wares she she walks on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 27, 2008 at 5:21 PM
Nice use of alliteration for a creative poem. Interesting piece for reflection. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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September 25, 2008 at 10:05 AM
Reminds me of the song "Jamaica Farewell." Vince
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September 25, 2008 at 7:38 AM
Ah yes. I am inhaling with her, and also listening for the calling wind. Excellent, as always! Love, Shar
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