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A Moment

Serenely the breeze blows past Gently she inhales to consume it all Stirred by sounds so isolate She strains to hear the wind call Gathering her wares she she walks on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/27/2008 5:21:00 PM
Nice use of alliteration for a creative poem. Interesting piece for reflection. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/25/2008 10:05:00 AM
Reminds me of the song "Jamaica Farewell." Vince
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Date: 9/25/2008 7:38:00 AM
Ah yes. I am inhaling with her, and also listening for the calling wind. Excellent, as always! Love, Shar
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