A Modern Haiku

Thank You Ms. Dietrich.

You are welcome.

Thank you, Brenda.

Thank you, James.

You do a great job at it. You be.

Thank you Linda, you are a good friend.

We got your back.

I put a whole new haiku in.

Yes rewrite the whole haiku. I think,so. Thank you so much Brenda.

I fixed this one by changing all the words with new words.

Not with this one Linda, but thank you.

Ok I will find two new lines for the first two.

I have write this Down to learn the process but it was intriguingly Helpful Friend and I Thank You very much...

How you post pictures though simple is complicated to explain. If you understand computers and computer terms here it is. A picture has to be posted first anywhere on the Internet for instance facebook. Then you need the URL of the photo that is the address of your picture on the Internet. You find it in the address bar of your Internet Browser. When you submit a poem at the bottom of the page below the space where you submitted your poem there is one more box. You can comment there and also add a picture. Push the image button and submit your URL in the space that says URL.

Oh that is just so neat thank you for teaching me this..I never knew this before Friend...

Yes it is for a contest. Haiku is a restrictive form only allowing three lines, first line 5 syllables second line 7 and third line 5. It is not everybody's Japanese cup of Jasmine tea. However I try to enter as many contests as possible in order to learn. So I entered this contest.

I just completely changed my submission.

Thanks Tim. So many people loved the photo I figured it was the wrong choice. Here is my new photo.

Thanks Tim. So many people loved the photo I figured it was the wrong choice. Here is my new photo.

Clones? Now there's an interesting têtes à trois.

gosh Tim, Maurice will think we are cloned we both make similar comments now we know him:-) hugs Jan x

I had to completely change the haiku, to fall into the proper form of Haiku.

I want to know how Jan does it to. I push send, and she reads it before I do. It's bleeding magic I tell ya.

HAHAHAHA!

I had to rewrite. It did not adhere to the rule of nature in an Haiku.

Do you and Cas have my computer bugged. How do you get in here so fast?

Getting to know you and your humour Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xxx

because if you didn't say "(the rest of it isn't bad either)" you're afraid I am going to say "ok i'll keep it and change the rest".