Written 23 January 2026 for A Valentine With a Twist in the Tail Poetry Contest of Suzette Richards
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A rose bunch heavy in my hand, A card sent, did not reach the land, My darling could not understand; I pray for my star, Stuck against the wall I dare make a call, No reply at all, And yet here we are! .
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