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A Missouri Heaven

When the full moon rises, and the stars start to glow. Down to that old creek bank, is where I like to go. A few leaves still hanging, shaking in the breeze. Holding on for dear life to them persimmon trees. Out across the gully, other side of the bridge. Coon hounds hot on a trail, just over the next ridge. Surrounded by nature, I am filled with delight. Deep in these Ozark woods, on moonlit winter nights. A cool wind a blowing, winter’s flurries around. The only sound to hear, the bawling of a hound. Down to that old creek bank, Is where I like to go. When the full moon rises, and the stars start to glow.

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Date: 7/31/2024 3:01:00 PM
Great imagery and puts me right there. Those hounds bawling being back some fond memories. Good one Jerry! :)
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Date: 7/16/2024 7:30:00 PM
This is just perfection, Jerry. Can picture every line. It's going straight into my FAVES. Thank you so much! ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/14/2024 2:01:00 AM
This poem brought back good memories of my youth. Very nicely rhymed and metered, too. You put a lot of work into the poem and it shows.
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Date: 7/13/2024 8:41:00 AM
This is a place that's well described. Tom Sawyer didn't impress me as much as this poem does. It overflows with the awakening of my senses, sight, hearing, feel of breeze. You may have ruined it. I think I'm ready to come to that creek bank with a tent.
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Date: 7/13/2024 8:26:00 AM
Well done Jerry...smooth and silky read with the gentle hint of an Ozark tone. Liked the inverted first and last verses..so smoothly done
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Date: 7/13/2024 7:29:00 AM
This is just delightful, Jerry! Your love for the area really shines through…
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Date: 7/13/2024 6:15:00 AM
A Missouri Heaven….love the title Brother J….the poem is just lovely and the rhyme flows beautifully! Could be a song?? Debx
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