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A Missed Opportunity

A mistake
     and tragedy
lost love
         lost forever
a few words
and he turned away
            hurt-
he left in the night
  to where unknown
I searched
       and searched   
                  searched
to say sorry
           I love you
   I want you . . .
               but
'till this day
              he is gone
I threw away
     what could have been
               and that is
a tragedy

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December 6, 2019


Poetry/Verse/A Missed Opportunity
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FGI Blog Series 23 - Tragedy
Brian Strand 

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Date: 12/9/2019 10:03:00 AM
I wonder wether he was worth it ...
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Date: 12/7/2019 7:50:00 AM
I liked this poem for how simply it delivers deep feelings--something special about its tone, Dear Heart.
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/7/2019 10:07:00 AM
Vijay, thanks for the compliment, I am learning from Brian and his blog challenges that much can be said in a few words, a poem does not have to be long to have impact !
Date: 12/6/2019 8:48:00 PM
the regrets and what could have been will linger and break us down if we allow them to...powerful heartfelt write...best wishes in the contest... hugs
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/7/2019 10:07:00 AM
Sandra, thanks for visiting, your comment is so true, but still I wonder sometimes what if !
Date: 12/6/2019 8:24:00 PM
Hi Constance a deep statement of what could of been. We often miss opportunities when its too late. I know I have. Thanks for sharing this
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/6/2019 8:25:00 PM
Greg, thanks so much for visiting and for the comment !