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A Missed Opportunity

A mistake and tragedy lost love lost forever a few words and he turned away hurt- he left in the night to where unknown I searched and searched searched to say sorry I love you I want you . . . but 'till this day he is gone I threw away what could have been and that is a tragedy __________________________ December 6, 2019 Poetry/Verse/A Missed Opportunity Copyright Protected, ID 19-1205-778-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. FGI Blog Series 23 - Tragedy Brian Strand Podium Place 1

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Date: 12/9/2019 10:03:00 AM
I wonder wether he was worth it ...
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Date: 12/7/2019 7:50:00 AM
I liked this poem for how simply it delivers deep feelings--something special about its tone, Dear Heart.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2019 10:07:00 AM
Vijay, thanks for the compliment, I am learning from Brian and his blog challenges that much can be said in a few words, a poem does not have to be long to have impact !
Date: 12/6/2019 8:48:00 PM
the regrets and what could have been will linger and break us down if we allow them to...powerful heartfelt write...best wishes in the contest... hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2019 10:07:00 AM
Sandra, thanks for visiting, your comment is so true, but still I wonder sometimes what if !
Date: 12/6/2019 8:24:00 PM
Hi Constance a deep statement of what could of been. We often miss opportunities when its too late. I know I have. Thanks for sharing this
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Constance La France
Date: 12/6/2019 8:25:00 PM
Greg, thanks so much for visiting and for the comment !

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