A Mirrored Mind

Little escapes a mirrored mind
Questions, thoughts, and lingering doubts
All twisted and mangled together at one time
Never finding an escape out.

Memories of times good brings smiles
Followed quickly by sodden pain
Memories of all those many miles
So much lost, yet so much gained

A life of intrigue and madness
Fun and chaotic hell
Tears of joy and of sadness
Finally extroverted 
Then deeper in your shell

All of this jumbled together
Will it end…NEVER
Your mirrored mind 
Will forever lead in this game
As it slowly and methodically 
Drives you insane.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 2, 2013 at 11:13 PM
Darla.:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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October 25, 2013 at 8:31 PM
Well done, Poetess... Your first post displays your dexterity and a talented pen. You will make many friends here... I hope you will count me among them..... Jake
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October 25, 2013 at 10:26 AM
ha ha I know the feeling Darla, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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October 25, 2013 at 5:14 AM
very beautifully written.just loved your poem.
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October 25, 2013 at 3:24 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Darla ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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October 24, 2013 at 10:14 PM
Darla, I like your first poetic piece,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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