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A Million Stars

A million stars ignite our head
Bubbles uncountable
In time stretched stillness, ego dead
Rapture ineffable 

One with the universe 
Singing the divine verse
Where’s the need to rehearse 

Within, all ours 
A million stars

13-November-2021
Quietus 

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Sara Kendrick November 13, 2021 at 4:04 AM Those starry, starry nights make us wonder how many are there but I think for man they are innumerable. Sara Unseeking Seeker November 13, 2021 at 6:25 AM The poem alludes to the stars within but yes, as above, so below. Google ‘Sahasrara, the thousand petalled lotus’

David Mchattie November 12, 2021 at 7:28 PM Quite lovely my friend. Well penned indeed. have a great day. Unseeking Seeker November 12, 2021 at 7:43 PM Thank you, David! So happy you enjoyed!